The Untouchable Tour
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- Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch • • Most recent review
- Result: errors have been fixed by
MaranoFan and
Vaughan J.
Cherrell410 (
talk)
15:33, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
The flow of the Synopsis and reception justg doesn't work, and that should be two different sections. The article includes nothing about ticket sales. In the attendance part of the table, the numbers don't add up correctly. The long - should be used instead of n/a. The dates should be be using ! scope="row" style="text-align:center;" |(insert date here). Cherrell410 ( talk) 02:50, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
- Oppose – Everything has been changed now, with the help of MaranoFan and I. We now have a synopsis section just by itself, and a reception section just by itself. — VAUGHAN J. ( TALK) 06:12, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
The Untouchable Tour
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch • • Most recent review
- Result: errors have been fixed by
MaranoFan and
Vaughan J.
Cherrell410 (
talk)
15:33, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
The flow of the Synopsis and reception justg doesn't work, and that should be two different sections. The article includes nothing about ticket sales. In the attendance part of the table, the numbers don't add up correctly. The long - should be used instead of n/a. The dates should be be using ! scope="row" style="text-align:center;" |(insert date here). Cherrell410 ( talk) 02:50, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
- Oppose – Everything has been changed now, with the help of MaranoFan and I. We now have a synopsis section just by itself, and a reception section just by itself. — VAUGHAN J. ( TALK) 06:12, 26 June 2023 (UTC)