This article has many WP:proselines, one-sentence paragraphs, unsourced statements, and WP:peacock terms. sst ✈ 14:47, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
-- sst ✈ 11:24, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
No new full members are planned to join Star Alliance at the moment.This needs a citation. And is it really necessary to have a two-sentence section on future members? The two lines could easily be moved under "2011-present: Further expansion".
Today, nearly 30% of global air travellers use the services of our member carriers or, looking at it from an overall industry perspective, two thirds of world-wide air travellers use one of the three airline alliances.Worldwide is a single word according to the Oxford English Dictionary.
BMI left on 20 April after its acquisition by International Airlines Group (IAG), parent company of Oneworld members Iberia and British Airways.There should be a definite article the before the word parent.
During the year Emirates considered joining Star Alliance, but decided against it. There needs to be a comma after year to delimit the parenthetical element. "
During the year Emirates considered joining Star Alliance" can easily be mistaken as an introductory clause.
On 1 April 2008 Turkish Airlines joined the alliance after a 15-month integration process beginning in December 2006lacks a comma while
On 27 October 2009, Continental Airlines became the 25th member of Star Alliance after leaving SkyTeam three days earlieruses a comma after the introductory phase.
This article has many WP:proselines, one-sentence paragraphs, unsourced statements, and WP:peacock terms. sst ✈ 14:47, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
-- sst ✈ 11:24, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
No new full members are planned to join Star Alliance at the moment.This needs a citation. And is it really necessary to have a two-sentence section on future members? The two lines could easily be moved under "2011-present: Further expansion".
Today, nearly 30% of global air travellers use the services of our member carriers or, looking at it from an overall industry perspective, two thirds of world-wide air travellers use one of the three airline alliances.Worldwide is a single word according to the Oxford English Dictionary.
BMI left on 20 April after its acquisition by International Airlines Group (IAG), parent company of Oneworld members Iberia and British Airways.There should be a definite article the before the word parent.
During the year Emirates considered joining Star Alliance, but decided against it. There needs to be a comma after year to delimit the parenthetical element. "
During the year Emirates considered joining Star Alliance" can easily be mistaken as an introductory clause.
On 1 April 2008 Turkish Airlines joined the alliance after a 15-month integration process beginning in December 2006lacks a comma while
On 27 October 2009, Continental Airlines became the 25th member of Star Alliance after leaving SkyTeam three days earlieruses a comma after the introductory phase.