The article is tagged with a neutrality tag in the "Business practice section" and I think it is well warrented. This section includes these sentences from sales strategy:
That is just in the first half of the first paragraph and I feel I could probably quote the whole section. It very much reads like an advertisement. The products offered section is not much better, with "The range will include a number of favourites that used to be found in the Woolworths' Pick n Mix selection" and "As well as their own brand line of products, the retailer also sells hundreds of products from other top brands such as Colgate, Walkers and Cadburys to name a few."
To me this reads too much like an advertisement to meet the neutrality requirements of a Good article. AIRcorn (talk) 12:22, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
The article is tagged with a neutrality tag in the "Business practice section" and I think it is well warrented. This section includes these sentences from sales strategy:
That is just in the first half of the first paragraph and I feel I could probably quote the whole section. It very much reads like an advertisement. The products offered section is not much better, with "The range will include a number of favourites that used to be found in the Woolworths' Pick n Mix selection" and "As well as their own brand line of products, the retailer also sells hundreds of products from other top brands such as Colgate, Walkers and Cadburys to name a few."
To me this reads too much like an advertisement to meet the neutrality requirements of a Good article. AIRcorn (talk) 12:22, 30 November 2012 (UTC)