1b: Too many one/two sentence paragraphs, inconsistent use of inverted commas (" and ' throughout the article), units like kilowatt are expressed in an abbreviated form (kW). There is also inconstant use of metric and imperial measurements. For example, in the "2007 onwards - The Mk II MINI" section the metric unit kilowatt is used. Under the section "Convertible" the imperial unit horsepower is used instead. Since the car is European, imperial units should be spelled out first, followed by the imperial unit in parentheses. Many of the headings also violate WP:MoS requirements stating that "headings generally should not repeat the title of the article".
2 a and b: There are way too many unsourced statements throughout the article (17 references all together).
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 litres, use 10 litres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 litres.
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OSX ( talk • contributions) 05:24, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
1b: Too many one/two sentence paragraphs, inconsistent use of inverted commas (" and ' throughout the article), units like kilowatt are expressed in an abbreviated form (kW). There is also inconstant use of metric and imperial measurements. For example, in the "2007 onwards - The Mk II MINI" section the metric unit kilowatt is used. Under the section "Convertible" the imperial unit horsepower is used instead. Since the car is European, imperial units should be spelled out first, followed by the imperial unit in parentheses. Many of the headings also violate WP:MoS requirements stating that "headings generally should not repeat the title of the article".
2 a and b: There are way too many unsourced statements throughout the article (17 references all together).
There are many more issues, here is a list generated by a semi-automatic javascript program:
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 litres, use 10 litres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 litres.
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OSX ( talk • contributions) 05:24, 31 March 2008 (UTC)