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Spinixster Thanks for flagging this. I'm recovering from covid at the moment so haven't much spare capacity, but I'll try and have a look over it in the next week or two and see what can be salvaged. Standards have definitely moved on a bit in the last 17 years!
Andrew Gray (
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22:22, 21 November 2023 (UTC)reply
I've overhauled the background (though it might need more tweaking). Working on digging up some suitable sourcing for critical commentary.
Andrew Gray (
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00:35, 6 December 2023 (UTC)reply
I've added a little more, and removed an uncited paragraph which does seem to have been editorial. The rest seems to be both sufficient and properly cited.
Chiswick Chap (
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21:35, 17 December 2023 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Spinixster Thanks for flagging this. I'm recovering from covid at the moment so haven't much spare capacity, but I'll try and have a look over it in the next week or two and see what can be salvaged. Standards have definitely moved on a bit in the last 17 years!
Andrew Gray (
talk)
22:22, 21 November 2023 (UTC)reply
I've overhauled the background (though it might need more tweaking). Working on digging up some suitable sourcing for critical commentary.
Andrew Gray (
talk)
00:35, 6 December 2023 (UTC)reply
I've added a little more, and removed an uncited paragraph which does seem to have been editorial. The rest seems to be both sufficient and properly cited.
Chiswick Chap (
talk)
21:35, 17 December 2023 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.