Alexander Onassis
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- Result: Withdrew, not the right venue for this action.
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11:14, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
I am submitting this article for GAR as suggested by User:SNUGGUMS on the article's talk page who conducted the original review. I amended/fixed the article based on their insightful suggestions. Gareth E Kegg ( talk) 11:57, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Promote after a couple of minor fixes - The issues SNUGGUMS discussed were gone. Just a couple more I found. Thanks,
ΤheQ Editor
Talk?
18:51, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Perhaps adding the
|death_cause=and|resting_place=parameters in the infobox - There are a lot of sentences starting with "Onassis" in the lead that makes it just sound weird
- Perhaps mention Thyssen in the lead
- Note Onassis's place of birth in the lead, not too specific, just the city or the state.
- Did he die on scene or in hospital?
- Perhaps adding the
- I've further amended it. Gareth E Kegg ( talk) 22:54, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Note: Gareth E Kegg, this isn't the venue where we promote articles that failed the GA review. You can only demote articles from the GA status here, but not upgrade them. You should re-nominate the article and receive proper review.-- Retrohead ( talk) 17:41, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
Alexander Onassis
- Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch • • Most recent review
- Result: Withdrew, not the right venue for this action.
Retrohead (
talk)
11:14, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
I am submitting this article for GAR as suggested by User:SNUGGUMS on the article's talk page who conducted the original review. I amended/fixed the article based on their insightful suggestions. Gareth E Kegg ( talk) 11:57, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Promote after a couple of minor fixes - The issues SNUGGUMS discussed were gone. Just a couple more I found. Thanks,
ΤheQ Editor
Talk?
18:51, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Perhaps adding the
|death_cause=and|resting_place=parameters in the infobox - There are a lot of sentences starting with "Onassis" in the lead that makes it just sound weird
- Perhaps mention Thyssen in the lead
- Note Onassis's place of birth in the lead, not too specific, just the city or the state.
- Did he die on scene or in hospital?
- Perhaps adding the
- I've further amended it. Gareth E Kegg ( talk) 22:54, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
- Note: Gareth E Kegg, this isn't the venue where we promote articles that failed the GA review. You can only demote articles from the GA status here, but not upgrade them. You should re-nominate the article and receive proper review.-- Retrohead ( talk) 17:41, 5 April 2015 (UTC)