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While a comprehensive article, several large sections lack inline citations (1.c), and sections of the prose, particularly the 'Early life' section, are quite poor. Image text does not conform to the manual of style, and there are two cleanup tags, including one requesting a citation (almost a month old). Parrot of Doom ( talk) 10:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Done; thanks. Images need alt text as per
WP:ALT.
Eubulides (
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Comment. It needs a prose clean up, as sections tend to be made up of many short paragraphs, making for a choppy read.
Keep Still worthy and one of the better Engineering-related articles which is under-represented. Non-conformance to a manual of style, and a couple of tags, do not automatically make a bad article! -- PopUpPirate ( talk) 23:24, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
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File:Saltashrab.jpg: missing permission.
File:Great Western.jpg is a copyright violation: Mark Myers (born 1945) is still living. This is a modern imagining of an historic event, not an historic picture painted at the time.
File:Great-Eastern-At-Sea-.jpg and
File:Brunel-Launch-Leviathon.jpg: missing permissions.
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The article was removed by YellowAssessmentMonkey 19:53, 12 November 2009 [1].
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While a comprehensive article, several large sections lack inline citations (1.c), and sections of the prose, particularly the 'Early life' section, are quite poor. Image text does not conform to the manual of style, and there are two cleanup tags, including one requesting a citation (almost a month old). Parrot of Doom ( talk) 10:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Done; thanks. Images need alt text as per
WP:ALT.
Eubulides (
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18:45, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
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Comment. It needs a prose clean up, as sections tend to be made up of many short paragraphs, making for a choppy read.
Keep Still worthy and one of the better Engineering-related articles which is under-represented. Non-conformance to a manual of style, and a couple of tags, do not automatically make a bad article! -- PopUpPirate ( talk) 23:24, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Images
File:Saltashrab.jpg: missing permission.
File:Great Western.jpg is a copyright violation: Mark Myers (born 1945) is still living. This is a modern imagining of an historic event, not an historic picture painted at the time.
File:Great-Eastern-At-Sea-.jpg and
File:Brunel-Launch-Leviathon.jpg: missing permissions.
DrKiernan (
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10:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
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