The article was kept by User:Marskell 10:42, 24 September 2008 [1].
This article, promoted in 2005, has not a single inline citation. I think that is the primary issue. Judgesurreal777 ( talk) 05:37, 24 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Agree with above comments by Judgesurreal777 ( talk · contribs) and H-stt ( talk · contribs). This article is not up to snuff in accordance with current WP:FA standards. Cirt ( talk) 17:16, 26 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Convoluted sentence alert:
"Located in south-central Idaho midway between Boise and Yellowstone National Park, the monument includes 53,545 acres (217 km2) in the Developed Area (the extent of the national monument before the preserve was added) and the visitor center is 5,900 feet (1,800 m) above sea level."
"...the extent of the national monument before the preserve was added..." seems to imply that there's more acreage that isn't being mentioned. And why tack on the sea level point rather than have a separate sentence? I'll go through the rest of the prose. Marskell ( talk) 13:00, 18 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I just completed a section-by-section copyedit and deletion of some still-uncited sentences that aren't needed. I'm now pretty happy with the article. -- mav ( talk) 02:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I am reasonably pleased with the prose now. Given above comments, this can go. Marskell ( talk) 10:22, 24 September 2008 (UTC) reply
The article was kept by User:Marskell 10:42, 24 September 2008 [1].
This article, promoted in 2005, has not a single inline citation. I think that is the primary issue. Judgesurreal777 ( talk) 05:37, 24 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Agree with above comments by Judgesurreal777 ( talk · contribs) and H-stt ( talk · contribs). This article is not up to snuff in accordance with current WP:FA standards. Cirt ( talk) 17:16, 26 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Convoluted sentence alert:
"Located in south-central Idaho midway between Boise and Yellowstone National Park, the monument includes 53,545 acres (217 km2) in the Developed Area (the extent of the national monument before the preserve was added) and the visitor center is 5,900 feet (1,800 m) above sea level."
"...the extent of the national monument before the preserve was added..." seems to imply that there's more acreage that isn't being mentioned. And why tack on the sea level point rather than have a separate sentence? I'll go through the rest of the prose. Marskell ( talk) 13:00, 18 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I just completed a section-by-section copyedit and deletion of some still-uncited sentences that aren't needed. I'm now pretty happy with the article. -- mav ( talk) 02:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I am reasonably pleased with the prose now. Given above comments, this can go. Marskell ( talk) 10:22, 24 September 2008 (UTC) reply