The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 19:12, 10 October 2009 [1].
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Launceston, Tasmania's main sporting stadium. Hosts regular Australian Football League matches. Aaroncrick ( talk) 08:11, 15 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments: Does anyone fell it necessary that the history is the first section?
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Copyedited one of the acres should be converted into metric YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 03:31, 22 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment – Haven't read this in-depth yet, but I did notice that a couple of problems mentioned in the first FAC have not been addressed: the use of Google Maps to cite the first sentence of Transport and the use of Wotif.com, which was questioned by Karanacs. Giants2008 ( 17–14) 22:16, 23 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Parkin discusses the geometry and how it affects tactics and style YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 06:07, 24 September 2009 (UTC) reply
This needs an independent copy-edit and MoS check.
That's just at the top. Tony (talk) 05:29, 3 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Oppose – 1a. I finally got a chance to give the article a through reading, only to find numerous prose problems and other issues.
I must echo Tony is asking for you to do more than just fix these issues; the entire page should be given a third-party copy-edit. Nominators can easily become too close to the text to spot flaws, and a single reviewer can't spot everything. Giants2008 ( 17–14) 21:37, 5 October 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 19:12, 10 October 2009 [1].
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Launceston, Tasmania's main sporting stadium. Hosts regular Australian Football League matches. Aaroncrick ( talk) 08:11, 15 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments: Does anyone fell it necessary that the history is the first section?
Aaroncrick (
talk)
08:24, 15 September 2009 (UTC)
reply
Copyedited one of the acres should be converted into metric YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 03:31, 22 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment – Haven't read this in-depth yet, but I did notice that a couple of problems mentioned in the first FAC have not been addressed: the use of Google Maps to cite the first sentence of Transport and the use of Wotif.com, which was questioned by Karanacs. Giants2008 ( 17–14) 22:16, 23 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Parkin discusses the geometry and how it affects tactics and style YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 06:07, 24 September 2009 (UTC) reply
This needs an independent copy-edit and MoS check.
That's just at the top. Tony (talk) 05:29, 3 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Oppose – 1a. I finally got a chance to give the article a through reading, only to find numerous prose problems and other issues.
I must echo Tony is asking for you to do more than just fix these issues; the entire page should be given a third-party copy-edit. Nominators can easily become too close to the text to spot flaws, and a single reviewer can't spot everything. Giants2008 ( 17–14) 21:37, 5 October 2009 (UTC) reply