The article was archived by Buidhe via FACBot ( talk) 13 January 2022 [1].
This article is about William Utermohlen, who created self-portraits after he was diagnosed with Alzheimer's disease in 1995. I have been expanding this article for five months now and in the past three there has been a successful GA review, the previous unsuccessful FAC and a peer review which has just been closed today. After all of that I am highly sure that this meets the FA criteria. Realmaxxver ( talk) 22:22, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
As the nominator said, it has almost all of the FA criteria met. It is also a very interesting article, I think it should be 100% the Featured Article of day. ---- Pink Saffron ( talk) 00:32, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
Placeholder. Fascinating. Ceoil ( talk) 06:07, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
I did not do a full review— just browsed for medical and MEDRS issues. I found no statements about AD that breach WP:MEDRS. I did see grammatical errors and typos as I read through, but assume others will get to those on copyedit. Google scholar produces a large number of sources that should be used for comprehensiveness; I don’t think the article can meet comprehensiveness without consulting those sources. Also, the original Lancet article should be provided, which I believe is this one (but I find it odd that sources don’t seem to specify), and might mention it was published as a case report:
This source is used in the article, but it offers a lot of untapped potential. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 08:18, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
One comment: for an artist whose work is famous for depicting the effects of Alzheimer's, I was expecting a bit more content on to the relationship between his disease and his art, i.e. how the medical symptoms of Alzheimer's are expressed in/illustrated by his works. As mentioned by SandyGeorgia, the original Lancet paper has some good material on this. Palmiero, Massimiliano; Di Giacomo, Dina; Passafiume, Domenico (August 2012). "Creativity and dementia: a review". Cognitive Processing. 13 (3): 193–209. doi: 10.1007/s10339-012-0439-y. is also an interesting MEDRS source, as it uses Crutch and al. 2001 as one of its primary materials. JBchrch talk 13:15, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
This has been open for more than three weeks and has yet to pick up any support. Unless it shows considerable further signs of building a consensus to promote over the next three or four days I am afraid that it will have to be archived. Gog the Mild ( talk) 19:10, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
@ FAC coordinators: I am requesting to withdraw this nomination. I need more time to fulfil comprehensiveness and also (Because SandyGeorgia pointed it out) try and replace some of the sources from Utermohlen's wife (like those from Utermohlen's website) with more secondary independent sources. Realmaxxver ( talk) 22:27, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
The article was archived by Buidhe via FACBot ( talk) 13 January 2022 [1].
This article is about William Utermohlen, who created self-portraits after he was diagnosed with Alzheimer's disease in 1995. I have been expanding this article for five months now and in the past three there has been a successful GA review, the previous unsuccessful FAC and a peer review which has just been closed today. After all of that I am highly sure that this meets the FA criteria. Realmaxxver ( talk) 22:22, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
As the nominator said, it has almost all of the FA criteria met. It is also a very interesting article, I think it should be 100% the Featured Article of day. ---- Pink Saffron ( talk) 00:32, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
Placeholder. Fascinating. Ceoil ( talk) 06:07, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
I did not do a full review— just browsed for medical and MEDRS issues. I found no statements about AD that breach WP:MEDRS. I did see grammatical errors and typos as I read through, but assume others will get to those on copyedit. Google scholar produces a large number of sources that should be used for comprehensiveness; I don’t think the article can meet comprehensiveness without consulting those sources. Also, the original Lancet article should be provided, which I believe is this one (but I find it odd that sources don’t seem to specify), and might mention it was published as a case report:
This source is used in the article, but it offers a lot of untapped potential. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 08:18, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
One comment: for an artist whose work is famous for depicting the effects of Alzheimer's, I was expecting a bit more content on to the relationship between his disease and his art, i.e. how the medical symptoms of Alzheimer's are expressed in/illustrated by his works. As mentioned by SandyGeorgia, the original Lancet paper has some good material on this. Palmiero, Massimiliano; Di Giacomo, Dina; Passafiume, Domenico (August 2012). "Creativity and dementia: a review". Cognitive Processing. 13 (3): 193–209. doi: 10.1007/s10339-012-0439-y. is also an interesting MEDRS source, as it uses Crutch and al. 2001 as one of its primary materials. JBchrch talk 13:15, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
This has been open for more than three weeks and has yet to pick up any support. Unless it shows considerable further signs of building a consensus to promote over the next three or four days I am afraid that it will have to be archived. Gog the Mild ( talk) 19:10, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
@ FAC coordinators: I am requesting to withdraw this nomination. I need more time to fulfil comprehensiveness and also (Because SandyGeorgia pointed it out) try and replace some of the sources from Utermohlen's wife (like those from Utermohlen's website) with more secondary independent sources. Realmaxxver ( talk) 22:27, 13 January 2022 (UTC)