The article was promoted by Laser brain via FACBot ( talk) 6 September 2019 [1].
Hello everyone! The above article is a country album by Maureen McCormick, an American actress best known for Marcia Brady in the sitcom The Brady Bunch. It was released on April 4, 1995, through the label Phantom Hill. McCormick wanted to use the album to break away from her Marcia Brady image, but it received mainly negative reviews and did not appear on any chart. In a 2008 interview, she said she was disappointed by restrictions to the album's recording process; McCormick as continued to perform country music and has participated in the reality television show Gone Country.
I had previously nominated this article for an FAC, although that nomination was far too premature. Fortunately, I found a significant amount of coverage through Newspapers.com to further expand the article, and I now believe it is ready for the FAC process. I would greatly appreciate any recommendations. Thank you in advance and have a great rest of your day! Aoba47 ( talk) 02:19, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
Going to get the ball rolling and give this a look. Toa Nidhiki05 13:58, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
@ Toa Nidhiki05: Thank you for the review! I believe that I have made all of the requested changes. Let me know if anything else needs work, and have a great rest of your weekend! Aoba47 ( talk) 20:19, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
An enjoyable read and fantastic work per usual. Tidy prose sans a couple of minor typos I caught at first glance: one in the third paragraph of the Background and Recording subsection with "Barring Coffing", and the other in the third sentence of the Critical reception subsection (but said her upper register as "a little screechy at times"). That's about it, very few comments to add that haven't already been addressed. Once these typos have been addressed, I'll be happy to offer my support. DAP 💅 3:32, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
I reviewed When You Get a Little Lonely at the time of its first nomination and didn't support then, but I believe the article has improved really a lot. Kudos to Aoba for his persistence. Right now I'm doing a second read-through, and making some small edits as I go along. Here are some comments:
I'm happy to support. It's well written and comprehensive, and as I mentioned above my spot checks give me pretty good confidence that the information in sources was used accurately throughout the article. Cheers, Moisejp ( talk) 14:34, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
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for GBooks linksRead the whole article three times trying to find something to complain about. The only points I'd make are:
"The album's executive producer Barry Coffing arranged and produced all of the tracks."to " Executive producer Barry Coffing arranged and produced all of the tracks." Etc.
appears as a guest artist, duetting with McCormick on "We Must Have Done Something Right".- could probably lose the "with McCormick" there, since it's fairly obvious at this point that it's her album on which he's featuring as a duet vocalist.
During a 1995 interview, McCormick... - "McCormick" is used twice in two sentences. What about changing this instance to merely "she", since it should be obvious that - in tandem with the previous sentence - you're referring to the artist.
"It's very Brady sort of voice".- source says "It's a very Brady sort of voice."
According to 2015 AXS article,- should probably be "According to a 2015 AXS article, and I think AXS should be linked in this prose.
Otherwise, this is a brilliantly written – and fascinating – article, and will be happy to support once these comments are addressed. Homeostasis07 ( talk · contribs) 23:22, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
The article was promoted by Laser brain via FACBot ( talk) 6 September 2019 [1].
Hello everyone! The above article is a country album by Maureen McCormick, an American actress best known for Marcia Brady in the sitcom The Brady Bunch. It was released on April 4, 1995, through the label Phantom Hill. McCormick wanted to use the album to break away from her Marcia Brady image, but it received mainly negative reviews and did not appear on any chart. In a 2008 interview, she said she was disappointed by restrictions to the album's recording process; McCormick as continued to perform country music and has participated in the reality television show Gone Country.
I had previously nominated this article for an FAC, although that nomination was far too premature. Fortunately, I found a significant amount of coverage through Newspapers.com to further expand the article, and I now believe it is ready for the FAC process. I would greatly appreciate any recommendations. Thank you in advance and have a great rest of your day! Aoba47 ( talk) 02:19, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
Going to get the ball rolling and give this a look. Toa Nidhiki05 13:58, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
@ Toa Nidhiki05: Thank you for the review! I believe that I have made all of the requested changes. Let me know if anything else needs work, and have a great rest of your weekend! Aoba47 ( talk) 20:19, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
An enjoyable read and fantastic work per usual. Tidy prose sans a couple of minor typos I caught at first glance: one in the third paragraph of the Background and Recording subsection with "Barring Coffing", and the other in the third sentence of the Critical reception subsection (but said her upper register as "a little screechy at times"). That's about it, very few comments to add that haven't already been addressed. Once these typos have been addressed, I'll be happy to offer my support. DAP 💅 3:32, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
I reviewed When You Get a Little Lonely at the time of its first nomination and didn't support then, but I believe the article has improved really a lot. Kudos to Aoba for his persistence. Right now I'm doing a second read-through, and making some small edits as I go along. Here are some comments:
I'm happy to support. It's well written and comprehensive, and as I mentioned above my spot checks give me pretty good confidence that the information in sources was used accurately throughout the article. Cheers, Moisejp ( talk) 14:34, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
|via=
for GBooks linksRead the whole article three times trying to find something to complain about. The only points I'd make are:
"The album's executive producer Barry Coffing arranged and produced all of the tracks."to " Executive producer Barry Coffing arranged and produced all of the tracks." Etc.
appears as a guest artist, duetting with McCormick on "We Must Have Done Something Right".- could probably lose the "with McCormick" there, since it's fairly obvious at this point that it's her album on which he's featuring as a duet vocalist.
During a 1995 interview, McCormick... - "McCormick" is used twice in two sentences. What about changing this instance to merely "she", since it should be obvious that - in tandem with the previous sentence - you're referring to the artist.
"It's very Brady sort of voice".- source says "It's a very Brady sort of voice."
According to 2015 AXS article,- should probably be "According to a 2015 AXS article, and I think AXS should be linked in this prose.
Otherwise, this is a brilliantly written – and fascinating – article, and will be happy to support once these comments are addressed. Homeostasis07 ( talk · contribs) 23:22, 1 September 2019 (UTC)