The article was promoted by Graham Beards via FACBot ( talk) 20:22, 15 October 2015 [1].
This article is about the 2000 role-playing game set in White Wolf Publishing's World of Darkness. It was developed by Nihilistic Software and released by Activision for Microsoft Windows and Mac OS. The game is based on White Wolf's role-playing game Vampire: The Masquerade; it follows the adventures of Christof Romuald, a 12th-century French crusader who is killed and revived as a Vampire. The game depicts Christof's centuries-long journey from the Dark Ages of 12th-century Prague and Vienna to modern-day London and New York City in search of his humanity and his kidnapped love, the nun Anezka.
The article is as comprehensive and detailed as can be about this game. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 20:22, 29 August 2015 (UTC) reply
Oh goody, never got to play this but did play Jyhad quite a bit...taking a look now. WIll jot queries below and copyedit as I go (please revert if I accidentally guff the meaning) Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 05:54, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply
The prose flows better in the body of the article than the lead, which is a good thing. More later. Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 06:17, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Ok, more:
Alright, I think I tentatively support on comprehensiveness and prose, pending more critical eyes than mine having a lookover. cheers, Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 23:34, 9 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Comment: this is just an aside, but would it be possible to include one or more decorative/illustrative images? Are any public domain photos of the team members availableβor perhaps of the Gothic architecture that inspired the game's look? At the moment, there's a whole lot of text and not much visual interest, which gives the article a very intimidating first impression. JimmyBlackwing ( talk) 23:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 19:46, 28 September 2015 (UTC) reply |
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*I've made a couple corrections/changes myself here and there to fix grammar or sentence flow. Please double check these to make sure they retain the intended meaning of the original.
I've only reviewed through the gameplay section, but I'll have more tomorrow when I'm more awake. Would rather not provide a half-asleep review~ Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 01:39, 26 September 2015 (UTC) reply
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Mostly looks good. The development section in particular is amazingly detailed, great work! A few comments / questions, though:
FAC Coord's Note - Did I miss a source review? Graham Beards ( talk) 16:55, 6 October 2015 (UTC) reply
I've gone through all the sources, passed them through Checklinks, and checked for consistency. Everything seems very much in order. I am willing to give my Support to this article's promotion to FA. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 15:54, 12 October 2015 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by Graham Beards via FACBot ( talk) 20:22, 15 October 2015 [1].
This article is about the 2000 role-playing game set in White Wolf Publishing's World of Darkness. It was developed by Nihilistic Software and released by Activision for Microsoft Windows and Mac OS. The game is based on White Wolf's role-playing game Vampire: The Masquerade; it follows the adventures of Christof Romuald, a 12th-century French crusader who is killed and revived as a Vampire. The game depicts Christof's centuries-long journey from the Dark Ages of 12th-century Prague and Vienna to modern-day London and New York City in search of his humanity and his kidnapped love, the nun Anezka.
The article is as comprehensive and detailed as can be about this game. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 20:22, 29 August 2015 (UTC) reply
Oh goody, never got to play this but did play Jyhad quite a bit...taking a look now. WIll jot queries below and copyedit as I go (please revert if I accidentally guff the meaning) Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 05:54, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply
The prose flows better in the body of the article than the lead, which is a good thing. More later. Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 06:17, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Ok, more:
Alright, I think I tentatively support on comprehensiveness and prose, pending more critical eyes than mine having a lookover. cheers, Cas Liber ( talk Β· contribs) 23:34, 9 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Comment: this is just an aside, but would it be possible to include one or more decorative/illustrative images? Are any public domain photos of the team members availableβor perhaps of the Gothic architecture that inspired the game's look? At the moment, there's a whole lot of text and not much visual interest, which gives the article a very intimidating first impression. JimmyBlackwing ( talk) 23:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 19:46, 28 September 2015 (UTC) reply |
---|
*I've made a couple corrections/changes myself here and there to fix grammar or sentence flow. Please double check these to make sure they retain the intended meaning of the original.
I've only reviewed through the gameplay section, but I'll have more tomorrow when I'm more awake. Would rather not provide a half-asleep review~ Cyclonebiskit ( talk) 01:39, 26 September 2015 (UTC) reply
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Mostly looks good. The development section in particular is amazingly detailed, great work! A few comments / questions, though:
FAC Coord's Note - Did I miss a source review? Graham Beards ( talk) 16:55, 6 October 2015 (UTC) reply
I've gone through all the sources, passed them through Checklinks, and checked for consistency. Everything seems very much in order. I am willing to give my Support to this article's promotion to FA. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 15:54, 12 October 2015 (UTC) reply