The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 23:51, 31 October 2009 [1].
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This is an article I have spent considerable time working on during the last four months. I have read three books on the subject, and did a significant amount of research on the topic. I started working on the article as part of my personal project on expanding all the articles for the Governors of Indiana. The article is comprehensive, well sourced, and has been through two thorough GA reviews, and a number of copy edits. Marshall was the VP under Woodrow Wilson and has a facinating story, and played an important role (or rather a lack of a role which was in itself a role) in the shaping the direction of the USA foreign policy following World War I. I believe this article satisfies the FA criteria, and is worthy of the star. I will work to quickly resolve any issues that may arise and look forward to any feedback. — Charles Edward ( Talk | Contribs) 18:14, 12 October 2009 (UTC) reply
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Looking back on my comments, I think I must have been in a bad mood last night. I stand by my statement that the article needs a lot of work (on the prose - the research and organization are top-notch), but I could certainly have communicated that in a pleasanter manner. My apologies, and kudos to you for graciously receiving even ungracious criticism. Anyway, I'm continuing my copyedit.
Comment Thanks, Charles, for another fantastic Indiana-related article!! I'd be happy to do a copyedit, however well I can. One concern is the pictures: The lead image is just a head crop of the image under World War I. What about File:VPthomasrmarshall.JPG or File:Thomas Marshall, bain photo portrait, circa 1912.jpg? Reywas92 Talk 04:00, 25 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Right, I Support. Reywas92 Talk 21:19, 28 October 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 23:51, 31 October 2009 [1].
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This is an article I have spent considerable time working on during the last four months. I have read three books on the subject, and did a significant amount of research on the topic. I started working on the article as part of my personal project on expanding all the articles for the Governors of Indiana. The article is comprehensive, well sourced, and has been through two thorough GA reviews, and a number of copy edits. Marshall was the VP under Woodrow Wilson and has a facinating story, and played an important role (or rather a lack of a role which was in itself a role) in the shaping the direction of the USA foreign policy following World War I. I believe this article satisfies the FA criteria, and is worthy of the star. I will work to quickly resolve any issues that may arise and look forward to any feedback. — Charles Edward ( Talk | Contribs) 18:14, 12 October 2009 (UTC) reply
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NW (
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23:10, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
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Questions:
Looking back on my comments, I think I must have been in a bad mood last night. I stand by my statement that the article needs a lot of work (on the prose - the research and organization are top-notch), but I could certainly have communicated that in a pleasanter manner. My apologies, and kudos to you for graciously receiving even ungracious criticism. Anyway, I'm continuing my copyedit.
Comment Thanks, Charles, for another fantastic Indiana-related article!! I'd be happy to do a copyedit, however well I can. One concern is the pictures: The lead image is just a head crop of the image under World War I. What about File:VPthomasrmarshall.JPG or File:Thomas Marshall, bain photo portrait, circa 1912.jpg? Reywas92 Talk 04:00, 25 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Right, I Support. Reywas92 Talk 21:19, 28 October 2009 (UTC) reply