A great article with lots of information on The Nightmare Before Christmas and covers all the topics with a great layout and lots of usefull information. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Oogie13oogie ( talk • contribs) (Self-nomination)
1. In the "Trading card game" section: "Sometime in 2005..." Sometime? Someone is going to need to do a little bit more research and find the correct date. Also, this section makes no sense to anyone not familiar with these games; what is a starter set? What is a tournament kit? Actually, the card section should probably be removed completely; there's not a separate section for every other kind of merchandising they've done.
2. In "External links" section: "Tim Burton fansite with a great message board fan community". This probably shouldn't be on here at all, but the description is definitely POV. Who says it's great?
3. Video game sections read like advertisements or Gamepro reviews (which is really the same thing).
4. Is there a source for the claim that NB4C is "one of the most sucessful franchises ever in terms of selling merchandise"?
5. Grammar issues, like "the two are in risk of their lives," or "For the past five years, the Disneyland and Tokyo Disneyland in California and Japan..."
This article really should have had a peer review before being put up for FAC. Kafziel 14:42, 21 February 2006 (UTC)
A great article with lots of information on The Nightmare Before Christmas and covers all the topics with a great layout and lots of usefull information. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Oogie13oogie ( talk • contribs) (Self-nomination)
1. In the "Trading card game" section: "Sometime in 2005..." Sometime? Someone is going to need to do a little bit more research and find the correct date. Also, this section makes no sense to anyone not familiar with these games; what is a starter set? What is a tournament kit? Actually, the card section should probably be removed completely; there's not a separate section for every other kind of merchandising they've done.
2. In "External links" section: "Tim Burton fansite with a great message board fan community". This probably shouldn't be on here at all, but the description is definitely POV. Who says it's great?
3. Video game sections read like advertisements or Gamepro reviews (which is really the same thing).
4. Is there a source for the claim that NB4C is "one of the most sucessful franchises ever in terms of selling merchandise"?
5. Grammar issues, like "the two are in risk of their lives," or "For the past five years, the Disneyland and Tokyo Disneyland in California and Japan..."
This article really should have had a peer review before being put up for FAC. Kafziel 14:42, 21 February 2006 (UTC)