The article was not promoted by Ian Rose 10:02, 27 December 2013 (UTC) [1]. reply
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This article attracted a very positive response when it ran on DYK a few months ago, and it recently became a Good Article. I'm aiming to get it up to Featured Article standard in time for the next Martin Luther King Day (in mid-January) so here it is for your consideration. Prioryman ( talk) 08:28, 28 November 2013 (UTC) reply
Feel free to disagree with anything here—some of it is just my 'druthers.
——— Curly Turkey ( gobble) 11:20, 28 November 2013 (UTC) reply
Images are fine, captions are good. Nikkimaria ( talk) 14:14, 5 December 2013 (UTC) reply
Comment "As the writer George Schuyler ... work purposes."—I'd remove this bit from the lead. It merely repeats issues that have been succinctly raised in the previous two sentences (and isn't really directly about the Green Book to warrant a quotation). Considering splitting the second para into two. (locked-out User:Indopug) 122.172.11.178 ( talk) 16:09, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply
Closing comment -- This review has been open a month without approaching consensus to promote so I'll be archiving it shortly. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 07:16, 27 December 2013 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by Ian Rose 10:02, 27 December 2013 (UTC) [1]. reply
The Negro Motorist Green Book ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
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This article attracted a very positive response when it ran on DYK a few months ago, and it recently became a Good Article. I'm aiming to get it up to Featured Article standard in time for the next Martin Luther King Day (in mid-January) so here it is for your consideration. Prioryman ( talk) 08:28, 28 November 2013 (UTC) reply
Feel free to disagree with anything here—some of it is just my 'druthers.
——— Curly Turkey ( gobble) 11:20, 28 November 2013 (UTC) reply
Images are fine, captions are good. Nikkimaria ( talk) 14:14, 5 December 2013 (UTC) reply
Comment "As the writer George Schuyler ... work purposes."—I'd remove this bit from the lead. It merely repeats issues that have been succinctly raised in the previous two sentences (and isn't really directly about the Green Book to warrant a quotation). Considering splitting the second para into two. (locked-out User:Indopug) 122.172.11.178 ( talk) 16:09, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply
Closing comment -- This review has been open a month without approaching consensus to promote so I'll be archiving it shortly. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 07:16, 27 December 2013 (UTC) reply