The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 00:32, 5 October 2008 [1].
Hi, I would like to try to renominating this. It has been up in July 2008 at the above link, and before that in
June 2008. In the interim it
became a Good Article. I want to try again, almost 100 edits later.
Cla68 and
Andreasegde have helped out on copyediting, and I think it's much better now. As far as I can tell, every criticism has been addressed. It's been physically restructured as well to have similar structures and layouts as other FAs for various bands. I was thinking of trimming back the historical information on the band members seen under
The Greencards#Formation as I've replicated the material (and cut some already!) to the various subarticles for the band members and also a bit for the album articles. The history of the formation of the Greencards is a core part of the majority of the sources on the band, and a major aspect of the subject itself--three highly trained foreigners basically forming a niche supergroup that has redefined an extremely American musical style. What else does it need, from where it stands now? Thanks!!
rootology (
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Comments - sources addressed last FAC. I too note the dead link showing up with the link checker tool, otherwise looks good. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Well done article overall. – Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 19:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 18:19, 3 October 2008 (UTC) reply
Comment - What makes americanahomeplace.com a reliable source? Otherwise, the sourcing for the article looks okay. -- Aude ( talk) 05:13, 4 October 2008 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 00:32, 5 October 2008 [1].
Hi, I would like to try to renominating this. It has been up in July 2008 at the above link, and before that in
June 2008. In the interim it
became a Good Article. I want to try again, almost 100 edits later.
Cla68 and
Andreasegde have helped out on copyediting, and I think it's much better now. As far as I can tell, every criticism has been addressed. It's been physically restructured as well to have similar structures and layouts as other FAs for various bands. I was thinking of trimming back the historical information on the band members seen under
The Greencards#Formation as I've replicated the material (and cut some already!) to the various subarticles for the band members and also a bit for the album articles. The history of the formation of the Greencards is a core part of the majority of the sources on the band, and a major aspect of the subject itself--three highly trained foreigners basically forming a niche supergroup that has redefined an extremely American musical style. What else does it need, from where it stands now? Thanks!!
rootology (
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T)
05:44, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
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Comments - sources addressed last FAC. I too note the dead link showing up with the link checker tool, otherwise looks good. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Well done article overall. – Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 19:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 18:19, 3 October 2008 (UTC) reply
Comment - What makes americanahomeplace.com a reliable source? Otherwise, the sourcing for the article looks okay. -- Aude ( talk) 05:13, 4 October 2008 (UTC) reply