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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot ( talk) 31 December 2020 [1].


Steven Gerrard

Nominator(s): REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 17:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Steven Gerrard is a major footballer and quite possible the best Liverpool player of the 21st century. I have already brought this to GA status and feel that it could pass FA criteria to. I am open to suggestions of improvement to meet the criteria. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 17:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC) reply

I don't own the books in refs 1 and 5, but apart from that I have access to all the sources. Hope that won't be a problem for any reviewers. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 15:28, 28 December 2020 (UTC) reply

REDMAN, you have limited contributions to this article; please see the WP:FAC instructions. Did you seek clearance from @ Saintandy7 and Mattythewhite: before initiating this FAC? SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 23:32, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply


Drive-by-comments

  • After reading the lead section, I think it could do with some further refinement. Perhaps make it more neutral (for instance, there's four uses of the word "greatest").
  • The sentence, "In 2009, Zinedine Zidane and Pelé said that they considered Gerrard to be the best footballer in the world.", doesn't need to be in the lead either.
  • I couldn't find the source to support this in the article: "Chosen by The Daily Telegraph as Liverpool's greatest ever player"
  • You mention the The Gerrard Final in the lead, but it's not in the rest of the article
  • The sentence about retirement could be integrated, eg. "After retiring from from international football in 2014, Gerrard became a coach.."

Thanks, LM150 14:25, 12 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Done all of the above.

Image review

  • There is some sandwiching in the Style of play section
Done
  • Suggest adding alt text
Any specific images, or just all of them? REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:06, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
All. Nikkimaria ( talk) 21:15, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
Done. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:45, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Done, except for two instances where it is necessary. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:04, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

It isn't necessary in those cases - you can use |upright= instead. Nikkimaria ( talk) 21:15, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
Done. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:14, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

@ LM150 and Nikkimaria: Thanks for your comments. I have addressed them or replied. Any further comments or corrections would be welcome. (Sorry for my delay in answering, I have had a busy week.) REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Please read the FAC instructions and remove the “Done” templates; they cause a template limits problem that affects the entire page, as well as the FAC archives. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 21:51, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Ok, thanks for the tip. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Coord note

Hi, with little commentary after three weeks, and none in the past ten days, I don't think this nom is going anywhere fast so I'll be archiving it shortly. Given that lack of commentary I'm prepared to waive the usual two weeks before a re-nom if you so choose to do that but per FAC instructions I'd recommend trying Peer Review first. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 05:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC) reply

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot ( talk) 31 December 2020 [1].


Steven Gerrard

Nominator(s): REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 17:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Steven Gerrard is a major footballer and quite possible the best Liverpool player of the 21st century. I have already brought this to GA status and feel that it could pass FA criteria to. I am open to suggestions of improvement to meet the criteria. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 17:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC) reply

I don't own the books in refs 1 and 5, but apart from that I have access to all the sources. Hope that won't be a problem for any reviewers. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 15:28, 28 December 2020 (UTC) reply

REDMAN, you have limited contributions to this article; please see the WP:FAC instructions. Did you seek clearance from @ Saintandy7 and Mattythewhite: before initiating this FAC? SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 23:32, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply


Drive-by-comments

  • After reading the lead section, I think it could do with some further refinement. Perhaps make it more neutral (for instance, there's four uses of the word "greatest").
  • The sentence, "In 2009, Zinedine Zidane and Pelé said that they considered Gerrard to be the best footballer in the world.", doesn't need to be in the lead either.
  • I couldn't find the source to support this in the article: "Chosen by The Daily Telegraph as Liverpool's greatest ever player"
  • You mention the The Gerrard Final in the lead, but it's not in the rest of the article
  • The sentence about retirement could be integrated, eg. "After retiring from from international football in 2014, Gerrard became a coach.."

Thanks, LM150 14:25, 12 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Done all of the above.

Image review

  • There is some sandwiching in the Style of play section
Done
  • Suggest adding alt text
Any specific images, or just all of them? REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:06, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
All. Nikkimaria ( talk) 21:15, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
Done. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:45, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Done, except for two instances where it is necessary. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:04, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

It isn't necessary in those cases - you can use |upright= instead. Nikkimaria ( talk) 21:15, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply
Done. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:14, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

@ LM150 and Nikkimaria: Thanks for your comments. I have addressed them or replied. Any further comments or corrections would be welcome. (Sorry for my delay in answering, I have had a busy week.) REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 19:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Please read the FAC instructions and remove the “Done” templates; they cause a template limits problem that affects the entire page, as well as the FAC archives. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 21:51, 17 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Ok, thanks for the tip. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Coord note

Hi, with little commentary after three weeks, and none in the past ten days, I don't think this nom is going anywhere fast so I'll be archiving it shortly. Given that lack of commentary I'm prepared to waive the usual two weeks before a re-nom if you so choose to do that but per FAC instructions I'd recommend trying Peer Review first. Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 05:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC) reply

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.

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