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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Sarastro1 via FACBot ( talk) 10:29, 19 August 2018 [1].


Nominator(s): Parsecboy ( talk) 17:51, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Another article on a German battleship up for FAC, part of this topic - this ship was one of the few German pre-dreadnought battleships to actually see battle during World War I, and she was one of a handful that were retained after the war by the postwar navy. Like the other articles I've nominated here recently, I originally wrote the article in 2010 and then completely rewrote it with new sources last year. It has since passed a MILHIST A-class review ( here). Thanks to all who take the time to review the article. Parsecboy ( talk) 17:51, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support on prose per my standard disclaimer. Well done. I've looked at the changes made since I reviewed this for A-class. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. These are my edits. - Dank ( push to talk) 21:41, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support I reviewed this in detail at Milhist A-Class earlier this year, and it hasn't had any appreciable changes since. I consider it meets the FA criteria. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 09:36, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support as WikiProject Germany Coordinator. – Vami _IV✠ 11:20, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Images are appropriately licensed. Nikkimaria ( talk) 15:41, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support. I made very minor changes, please check. I think we don't need the Elsaß footnote. In German, the ship's name is also Elsass, and I learned years ago that ship names always have ss because they are all capital letters. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 22:18, 31 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Thanks, that's a good point, Gerda. Parsecboy ( talk) 23:02, 31 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Source review the sources are all of high quality and reliable, mostly by acknowledged specialists in the naval field. No issues formatting-wise, but I do have a question about the Dodson source in Further reading. Does it have anything unique to say about this ship, or the class in general? Nate, I wonder if it should be used as a source rather than in a Further reading section? What's your thinking on that? Cheers, Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:45, 6 August 2018 (UTC) reply

The article has more to do with the class than individual ships, though what it does cover on the ships' activities is focused on their post-war careers, and it doesn't have anything to say beyond what's in Hildebrand et. al. Parsecboy ( talk) 12:31, 10 August 2018 (UTC) reply


Closing comment: Although there has not been much in terms of comment here, we have four supports and a fairly detailed A-class review. As this has been open for a month, I think we have a consensus to promote. Sarastro ( talk) 10:28, 19 August 2018 (UTC) reply

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Sarastro1 via FACBot ( talk) 10:29, 19 August 2018 [1].


Nominator(s): Parsecboy ( talk) 17:51, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Another article on a German battleship up for FAC, part of this topic - this ship was one of the few German pre-dreadnought battleships to actually see battle during World War I, and she was one of a handful that were retained after the war by the postwar navy. Like the other articles I've nominated here recently, I originally wrote the article in 2010 and then completely rewrote it with new sources last year. It has since passed a MILHIST A-class review ( here). Thanks to all who take the time to review the article. Parsecboy ( talk) 17:51, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support on prose per my standard disclaimer. Well done. I've looked at the changes made since I reviewed this for A-class. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. These are my edits. - Dank ( push to talk) 21:41, 20 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support I reviewed this in detail at Milhist A-Class earlier this year, and it hasn't had any appreciable changes since. I consider it meets the FA criteria. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 09:36, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support as WikiProject Germany Coordinator. – Vami _IV✠ 11:20, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Images are appropriately licensed. Nikkimaria ( talk) 15:41, 21 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Support. I made very minor changes, please check. I think we don't need the Elsaß footnote. In German, the ship's name is also Elsass, and I learned years ago that ship names always have ss because they are all capital letters. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 22:18, 31 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Thanks, that's a good point, Gerda. Parsecboy ( talk) 23:02, 31 July 2018 (UTC) reply

Source review the sources are all of high quality and reliable, mostly by acknowledged specialists in the naval field. No issues formatting-wise, but I do have a question about the Dodson source in Further reading. Does it have anything unique to say about this ship, or the class in general? Nate, I wonder if it should be used as a source rather than in a Further reading section? What's your thinking on that? Cheers, Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:45, 6 August 2018 (UTC) reply

The article has more to do with the class than individual ships, though what it does cover on the ships' activities is focused on their post-war careers, and it doesn't have anything to say beyond what's in Hildebrand et. al. Parsecboy ( talk) 12:31, 10 August 2018 (UTC) reply


Closing comment: Although there has not been much in terms of comment here, we have four supports and a fairly detailed A-class review. As this has been open for a month, I think we have a consensus to promote. Sarastro ( talk) 10:28, 19 August 2018 (UTC) reply

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.

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