The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 08:44, 14 October 2012 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because I fancy the song, it was critically acclaimed and is one of the group's most well-known songs. The article is well-written and supported by high-quality sources, and appears to meet WP:FAC. Till 05:17, 22 September 2012 (UTC) reply
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Comment: I have given this a bit of a peer review, as PR is not working too well at present. There is work to be done on the prose:
I've not looked at other aspects, but that's enough to be getting on with. Brianboulton ( talk) 19:14, 6 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Oppose. The prose generally seems rather wooden to me, and after almost three weeks at FAC I shouldn't be seeing this kind of thing in the lead: "'Red Dress' is considered one of the group's signature songs and among their most-well known singles". And I frankly find sentences such as "The keyboards were provided by Powell, Higgins, Tim 'Rolf' Larcombe and Jon Shave, of which the former two also completed the programming" to be incomprehensible at best. Malleus Fatuorum 02:59, 10 October 2012 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 08:44, 14 October 2012 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because I fancy the song, it was critically acclaimed and is one of the group's most well-known songs. The article is well-written and supported by high-quality sources, and appears to meet WP:FAC. Till 05:17, 22 September 2012 (UTC) reply
Media review
Source review
Comment: I have given this a bit of a peer review, as PR is not working too well at present. There is work to be done on the prose:
I've not looked at other aspects, but that's enough to be getting on with. Brianboulton ( talk) 19:14, 6 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Oppose. The prose generally seems rather wooden to me, and after almost three weeks at FAC I shouldn't be seeing this kind of thing in the lead: "'Red Dress' is considered one of the group's signature songs and among their most-well known singles". And I frankly find sentences such as "The keyboards were provided by Powell, Higgins, Tim 'Rolf' Larcombe and Jon Shave, of which the former two also completed the programming" to be incomprehensible at best. Malleus Fatuorum 02:59, 10 October 2012 (UTC) reply