The article was not promoted 00:34, 18 April 2008.
Well on the way to FA Ultra! 23:42, 7 April 2008 (UTC) reply
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Comments—This is not yet up to standard in terms of 1a. Keep working on the prose; preferably, find a collaborator who's unfamiliar with it and can use her strategic distance to advantage. Easy to find problems, just in the lead. The whole text is at issue, not just these examples.
Comment Definitely needs a copyedit. -- Una Smith ( talk) 21:02, 8 April 2008 (UTC) reply
*Oppose: criterion three concerns:
Karanacs ( talk) 16:00, 14 April 2008 (UTC) reply
In the UK we don't have High Schools so why When he attended high school, his nickname was "Irish".
And the section about charitable works begins with a whole paragraph about politics: Brosnan supported John Kerry in the 2004 Presidential election and is a vocal supporter of gun control and same-sex marriage.[65] An outspoken environmentalist,[66] Brosnan was named 'Best-dressed Environmentalist' in 2004 by the Sust... GrahamColm Talk 13:09, 16 April 2008 (UTC) reply
Mere comments ---> oppose declaration. I was asked to return, even though I hadn't formally opposed. Rather, I made comments, which meant that I didn't want to have to come back. But on reflection, I'm moving to an Oppose.
This is not good enough, and the hard work other reviewers have put in to demonstrate why the writing needs to be significantly improved throughout has not been carried through—merely subverted by the addressing of their examples alone. Sorry to be so blunt. A collaborator is necessary. TONY (talk) 12:43, 17 April 2008 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted 00:34, 18 April 2008.
Well on the way to FA Ultra! 23:42, 7 April 2008 (UTC) reply
Comments
Comments—This is not yet up to standard in terms of 1a. Keep working on the prose; preferably, find a collaborator who's unfamiliar with it and can use her strategic distance to advantage. Easy to find problems, just in the lead. The whole text is at issue, not just these examples.
Comment Definitely needs a copyedit. -- Una Smith ( talk) 21:02, 8 April 2008 (UTC) reply
*Oppose: criterion three concerns:
Karanacs ( talk) 16:00, 14 April 2008 (UTC) reply
In the UK we don't have High Schools so why When he attended high school, his nickname was "Irish".
And the section about charitable works begins with a whole paragraph about politics: Brosnan supported John Kerry in the 2004 Presidential election and is a vocal supporter of gun control and same-sex marriage.[65] An outspoken environmentalist,[66] Brosnan was named 'Best-dressed Environmentalist' in 2004 by the Sust... GrahamColm Talk 13:09, 16 April 2008 (UTC) reply
Mere comments ---> oppose declaration. I was asked to return, even though I hadn't formally opposed. Rather, I made comments, which meant that I didn't want to have to come back. But on reflection, I'm moving to an Oppose.
This is not good enough, and the hard work other reviewers have put in to demonstrate why the writing needs to be significantly improved throughout has not been carried through—merely subverted by the addressing of their examples alone. Sorry to be so blunt. A collaborator is necessary. TONY (talk) 12:43, 17 April 2008 (UTC) reply