The article was promoted by Ian Rose via FACBot ( talk) 06:05, 12 April 2015 (UTC) [1]. reply
This article is about a 2001 documentary film in which William Shatner and Leonard Nimoy discuss Star Trek and its effects on their lives. The article has undergone a copyedit by a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, and has passed a good article nomination. I have searched through several journal databases to ensure that the sourcing of this article is comprehensive. It is unfortunate that Shatner's alleged flatulence is the most commonly discussed element of this film in the literature, but we must be true to the sources. Neelix ( talk) 23:59, 11 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Images are appropriately licensed and captioned. Nikkimaria ( talk) 03:40, 14 March 2015 (UTC) reply
I'll mainly focus on prose issues although I might check some of the references if there are any problems with them. I'm certain somebody else will check the more technical points to this article but for now I'll list what I see here... I reviewed this GAN when Leonard Nimoy was still alive :'( ☯ Jag uar ☯ 21:00, 15 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Support. Delegates please note that I have carried out a source review in the capped section below (including a couple spotchecks, but mostly not). — Cliftonian (talk) 13:19, 1 April 2015 (UTC) reply
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*"in the 1960s science fiction television series Star Trek: The Original Series" seems a little repetitive. Perhaps "on television in Star Trek: The Original Series in the 1960s, and in the subsequent film franchise." As an aside—when did TOS start to be referred to as such? Was it not originally just called Star Trek?
Thanks for the read. Hope this helps — Cliftonian (talk) 23:34, 23 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Hi again David. I hate to be pedantic but there are still some references without locations given. All the books, for example. Also, perhaps explain briefly that a tribble is a Star Trek in-joke. I'd never heard of them. Another thought—since the alleged flatulence sound is the subject of specific discussion in the article, could we perhaps put a sound clip in the article under a fair use licence? I think this would do better than the picture of Howard Stern, who is only tangentially relevant. It would improve the article a lot to actually be able to hear this noise we keep talking about. (For other reviewers: someone's already made clips here if you're interested in hearing this noise.) — Cliftonian (talk) 07:28, 31 March 2015 (UTC) reply
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Well put together article - like the mix of reviews given.-- Iztwoz ( talk) 18:09, 3 April 2015 (UTC) reply
Happy to offer some thoughts. I'm no Trekkie, but did watch a lot of Voyager (sorry) as a kid.
Seems like a really nicely researched article. I was surprised how many details of one detail there were, but it was all well sourced. Josh Milburn ( talk) 21:16, 7 April 2015 (UTC) reply
Support. I've made some final minor tweaks and I'm now happy to support. A well put-together article. Josh Milburn ( talk) 16:29, 11 April 2015 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by Ian Rose via FACBot ( talk) 06:05, 12 April 2015 (UTC) [1]. reply
This article is about a 2001 documentary film in which William Shatner and Leonard Nimoy discuss Star Trek and its effects on their lives. The article has undergone a copyedit by a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, and has passed a good article nomination. I have searched through several journal databases to ensure that the sourcing of this article is comprehensive. It is unfortunate that Shatner's alleged flatulence is the most commonly discussed element of this film in the literature, but we must be true to the sources. Neelix ( talk) 23:59, 11 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Images are appropriately licensed and captioned. Nikkimaria ( talk) 03:40, 14 March 2015 (UTC) reply
I'll mainly focus on prose issues although I might check some of the references if there are any problems with them. I'm certain somebody else will check the more technical points to this article but for now I'll list what I see here... I reviewed this GAN when Leonard Nimoy was still alive :'( ☯ Jag uar ☯ 21:00, 15 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Support. Delegates please note that I have carried out a source review in the capped section below (including a couple spotchecks, but mostly not). — Cliftonian (talk) 13:19, 1 April 2015 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from — Cliftonian (talk) 13:19, 1 April 2015 (UTC) reply |
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*"in the 1960s science fiction television series Star Trek: The Original Series" seems a little repetitive. Perhaps "on television in Star Trek: The Original Series in the 1960s, and in the subsequent film franchise." As an aside—when did TOS start to be referred to as such? Was it not originally just called Star Trek?
Thanks for the read. Hope this helps — Cliftonian (talk) 23:34, 23 March 2015 (UTC) reply
Hi again David. I hate to be pedantic but there are still some references without locations given. All the books, for example. Also, perhaps explain briefly that a tribble is a Star Trek in-joke. I'd never heard of them. Another thought—since the alleged flatulence sound is the subject of specific discussion in the article, could we perhaps put a sound clip in the article under a fair use licence? I think this would do better than the picture of Howard Stern, who is only tangentially relevant. It would improve the article a lot to actually be able to hear this noise we keep talking about. (For other reviewers: someone's already made clips here if you're interested in hearing this noise.) — Cliftonian (talk) 07:28, 31 March 2015 (UTC) reply
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Well put together article - like the mix of reviews given.-- Iztwoz ( talk) 18:09, 3 April 2015 (UTC) reply
Happy to offer some thoughts. I'm no Trekkie, but did watch a lot of Voyager (sorry) as a kid.
Seems like a really nicely researched article. I was surprised how many details of one detail there were, but it was all well sourced. Josh Milburn ( talk) 21:16, 7 April 2015 (UTC) reply
Support. I've made some final minor tweaks and I'm now happy to support. A well put-together article. Josh Milburn ( talk) 16:29, 11 April 2015 (UTC) reply