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Second go-round for this article at FAC. Last time it got two supports and no opposes, but didn't quite manage to squeeze over the line, maybe that'll be different this time ;-) -- ChrisTheDude ( talk) 21:49, 27 February 2011 (UTC) reply
Sources comments: Sources were checked out at the last FAC. There have been a few changes since then, but nothing significant. My only query is that refs 107 and 108 appear to be identical, so why the double cite in the "Accolades" section? Otherwise sources and citations are all OK. Brianboulton ( talk) 11:45, 1 March 2011 (UTC) reply
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The Rambling Man ( talk) 19:40, 7 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Support I have no problems backing this as part of finest work. The Rambling Man ( talk) 20:09, 10 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Support Looks good enough for an FA status. Novice7 ( talk) 06:25, 18 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Weak support.Comments. Switched to weak support; the prose is not outstanding but I think it is good enough. Per
this note on FAC talk, I have posted my comments to
this FAC's talk page. This is an experiment to see if it makes the FAC easier to understand and navigate for the delegates, but if you don't like the effect, let me know and I'll move the comments back here.
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Comments by Axl.
In "Music and lyrics", paragraph 2, "Lovealot" is spelt with an "e" twice. Later in the article, there is no "e". Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:48, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
Perhaps you would consider adding alternative text to the pictures? Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:49, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
From "Promotion", paragraph 3: "In November 2010 she appeared on "Later...with Jools Holland" on British television, performing "It Takes a Muscle" with members of The Specials and "Born Free"." M.I.A. didn't perform with "Born Free". Did she perform "Born Free" with The Specials? Axl ¤ [Talk] 09:22, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
Ellipses should have spaces, and WP:NBSP work needed. Unclear why you use cite news for sources like BBC, and cite web for other online news sources. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 03:00, 3 April 2011 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 03:20, 3 April 2011 [1].
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Second go-round for this article at FAC. Last time it got two supports and no opposes, but didn't quite manage to squeeze over the line, maybe that'll be different this time ;-) -- ChrisTheDude ( talk) 21:49, 27 February 2011 (UTC) reply
Sources comments: Sources were checked out at the last FAC. There have been a few changes since then, but nothing significant. My only query is that refs 107 and 108 appear to be identical, so why the double cite in the "Accolades" section? Otherwise sources and citations are all OK. Brianboulton ( talk) 11:45, 1 March 2011 (UTC) reply
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The Rambling Man ( talk) 19:40, 7 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Support I have no problems backing this as part of finest work. The Rambling Man ( talk) 20:09, 10 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Support Looks good enough for an FA status. Novice7 ( talk) 06:25, 18 March 2011 (UTC) reply
Weak support.Comments. Switched to weak support; the prose is not outstanding but I think it is good enough. Per
this note on FAC talk, I have posted my comments to
this FAC's talk page. This is an experiment to see if it makes the FAC easier to understand and navigate for the delegates, but if you don't like the effect, let me know and I'll move the comments back here.
Mike Christie (
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library)
22:15, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
reply
Comments by Axl.
In "Music and lyrics", paragraph 2, "Lovealot" is spelt with an "e" twice. Later in the article, there is no "e". Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:48, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
Perhaps you would consider adding alternative text to the pictures? Axl ¤ [Talk] 08:49, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
From "Promotion", paragraph 3: "In November 2010 she appeared on "Later...with Jools Holland" on British television, performing "It Takes a Muscle" with members of The Specials and "Born Free"." M.I.A. didn't perform with "Born Free". Did she perform "Born Free" with The Specials? Axl ¤ [Talk] 09:22, 1 April 2011 (UTC) reply
Ellipses should have spaces, and WP:NBSP work needed. Unclear why you use cite news for sources like BBC, and cite web for other online news sources. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 03:00, 3 April 2011 (UTC) reply