The article was promoted by Karanacs 14:11, 29 July 2010 [1].
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An Australian backstroke swimmer active from the mid 1970s to 1984. Won an Olympic gold medal in 1980. He was also a model(!) and later a businessman. YellowMonkey ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 01:22, 14 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Sources comment: No sourcing issues, all OK Brianboulton ( talk) 10:00, 15 July 2010 (UTC) reply
General comment: I've not had time to read the whole article, but I noticed a couple of rather clumsy sentences in the last section:
Brianboulton ( talk) 10:00, 15 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Otherwise, seems good. -- Sarastro1 ( talk) 10:08, 21 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments – Read through the article and didn't find anything serious to comment on, just the handful of minor issues below:
The article was promoted by Karanacs 14:11, 29 July 2010 [1].
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An Australian backstroke swimmer active from the mid 1970s to 1984. Won an Olympic gold medal in 1980. He was also a model(!) and later a businessman. YellowMonkey ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 01:22, 14 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Sources comment: No sourcing issues, all OK Brianboulton ( talk) 10:00, 15 July 2010 (UTC) reply
General comment: I've not had time to read the whole article, but I noticed a couple of rather clumsy sentences in the last section:
Brianboulton ( talk) 10:00, 15 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Otherwise, seems good. -- Sarastro1 ( talk) 10:08, 21 July 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments – Read through the article and didn't find anything serious to comment on, just the handful of minor issues below: