The article was promoted by Karanacs 17:18, 15 September 2009 [1].
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Well, this is this article's third nomination. After the most recent unsuccesful nomination I went on a long break from Wikipedia, well now I'm back and ready to try again. This has been my project" since the first of March, so I've officially been "working on it" for 6, going into 7, months. Res Mar 14:12, 4 September 2009 (UTC) reply
More later.
I think the prose needs work too in general. It is somewhat choppy, I'd suggest asking one of the copyeditors I previously recommended. ceran thor 12:08, 5 September 2009 (UTC) reply
I sure do hope three votes isn't failable... Res Mar 00:43, 13 September 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by Karanacs 17:18, 15 September 2009 [1].
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Well, this is this article's third nomination. After the most recent unsuccesful nomination I went on a long break from Wikipedia, well now I'm back and ready to try again. This has been my project" since the first of March, so I've officially been "working on it" for 6, going into 7, months. Res Mar 14:12, 4 September 2009 (UTC) reply
More later.
I think the prose needs work too in general. It is somewhat choppy, I'd suggest asking one of the copyeditors I previously recommended. ceran thor 12:08, 5 September 2009 (UTC) reply
I sure do hope three votes isn't failable... Res Mar 00:43, 13 September 2009 (UTC) reply