The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 17:32, 12 December 2010 [1].
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A couple of months ago, the article on Lat the Malaysian cartoonist knighted (in his country) was brought here and became an FA. What made him internationally famous was his book The Kampung Boy. Now, I bring the adaptation of his book for judgment as a possible FA. Kampung Boy the animation is, in the words of a Malaysian animation critic, "the one that best portrays the country's image in terms of its culture and traditions" and a benchmark for the industry. This article is a comprehensive look at the animation from its conception to reception, drawing from academic sources and journalistic articles with its creator. Please take a look and appraise the article. Thank you. Jappalang ( talk) 03:05, 25 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Sources comments: All sources look good. This referencing format, also used in the Lat article, is a little strange to me, but it serves its purpose. Little spotchecking possible as few online material used. Brianboulton ( talk) 23:04, 26 November 2010 (UTC) reply
DAB/EL Check - no dabs, two external link problem- this link is broken (5th academic source) and this link appears to redirect strangely (third-to-last journalistic source), though that may be an artifact of not having a subscription. -- Pres N 22:11, 3 December 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments on the prose. I think the Lead needs a little more work. Although it is the shortest, I find it's often the most difficult section to write. I hope these comments are useful:
I liked the rest of the article :-) Graham Colm ( talk) 10:31, 8 December 2010 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 17:32, 12 December 2010 [1].
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A couple of months ago, the article on Lat the Malaysian cartoonist knighted (in his country) was brought here and became an FA. What made him internationally famous was his book The Kampung Boy. Now, I bring the adaptation of his book for judgment as a possible FA. Kampung Boy the animation is, in the words of a Malaysian animation critic, "the one that best portrays the country's image in terms of its culture and traditions" and a benchmark for the industry. This article is a comprehensive look at the animation from its conception to reception, drawing from academic sources and journalistic articles with its creator. Please take a look and appraise the article. Thank you. Jappalang ( talk) 03:05, 25 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Sources comments: All sources look good. This referencing format, also used in the Lat article, is a little strange to me, but it serves its purpose. Little spotchecking possible as few online material used. Brianboulton ( talk) 23:04, 26 November 2010 (UTC) reply
DAB/EL Check - no dabs, two external link problem- this link is broken (5th academic source) and this link appears to redirect strangely (third-to-last journalistic source), though that may be an artifact of not having a subscription. -- Pres N 22:11, 3 December 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments on the prose. I think the Lead needs a little more work. Although it is the shortest, I find it's often the most difficult section to write. I hope these comments are useful:
I liked the rest of the article :-) Graham Colm ( talk) 10:31, 8 December 2010 (UTC) reply