The article was promoted by Ian Rose 00:29, 13 July 2012 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because I have brought the article to GA, and after some more work, it is finally ready for FA. Khanassassin ☪ 16:24, 5 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Comments - leaning to Oppose
Overview
Production
Additional works
-- Cassianto ( talk) 22:42, 5 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Cast
We could make it clear from the first sentence that all parts are voiced, and then go onto list in prose format who played what part. See
this or
this as an example of I think what you should be trying to achieve. Alternatively, can I suggest making Cast a section and having the characters as sub-sections? That way, the character can be described and the actor/actress listed individually such as
this. Looking around FA articles of similar subject, I do feel as if this part of the article is a little brief.
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Cassianto (
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17:53, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
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Additional works
Reception
OK I generally like lists to be separate from prose articles and I would ordinarily suggest moving them out into an article of their own. However, there is no guideline around this and is purely a personal prefernce, so I'm happy to leave in situ. -- Cassianto ( talk) 16:39, 6 May 2012 (UTC) reply
OK
I appreciate the fixes - most of which have been addressed to my satisfaction. However, I am still leaning to Oppose on prose. Once the jargon issues have been addressed and the article has been proof read to ensure words and phrases like it have been eliminated, I would be happy to show my support. -- Cassianto ( talk) 11:20, 6 May 2012 (UTC) reply
-- Cassianto ( talk) 15:36, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Comment perhaps not a problem here, but at a WP:FLC nomination, there was a strong oppose from one of the directors ( Giants2008), with this edit with drastic concerns over copyvio. Just thought it was worth noting so this process could take extra special care in this regard. All the best, The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:52, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Source review - spotchecks not done, need to be done per comment above (and a quick reminder that done templates aren't meant to be used on FAC pages, per the instructions at the top of WP:FAC). Nikkimaria ( talk) 20:39, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
My eyes may deceive me, but I can't find any mention of Rolf in the "Voicing" subsection.
LittleJerry (
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17:18, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
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Comment please make sure all data tables comply with MOS:DTT which includes row and col scopes for screen readers and would also advise that sortable tables should have linkable items linked every time. Also, please make sure you comply throughout with WP:DASH, there are a number of hyphens misused. The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:21, 12 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Some comments:
Overall, looks good though. Will support, pending response. Axem Titanium ( talk) 20:06, 1 June 2012 (UTC) reply
Delegate notes
Support with comment: This sentence under production, "Antonucci, an advocate of hand-drawn animation, used wobbling animation in Ed, Edd n Eddy as a homage to the hand-drawn cartoons to cartoons of the period 1940 to1980.[1]", should have a space between 'to' and '1980'.
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Comment: Does the table of DVDs need to be on this article and the episode list? I know it's convenient, but whenever one gets edited, the other one will need to be edited too. Paper Luigi T • C 05:09, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply
Source review
Article appears to reflect sources overrall. but I did come across one that doesn't do it exactly and a deadlink.
LittleJerry (
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15:28, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
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The article was promoted by Ian Rose 00:29, 13 July 2012 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because I have brought the article to GA, and after some more work, it is finally ready for FA. Khanassassin ☪ 16:24, 5 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Comments - leaning to Oppose
Overview
Production
Additional works
-- Cassianto ( talk) 22:42, 5 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Cast
We could make it clear from the first sentence that all parts are voiced, and then go onto list in prose format who played what part. See
this or
this as an example of I think what you should be trying to achieve. Alternatively, can I suggest making Cast a section and having the characters as sub-sections? That way, the character can be described and the actor/actress listed individually such as
this. Looking around FA articles of similar subject, I do feel as if this part of the article is a little brief.
--
Cassianto (
talk)
17:53, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
reply
Additional works
Reception
OK I generally like lists to be separate from prose articles and I would ordinarily suggest moving them out into an article of their own. However, there is no guideline around this and is purely a personal prefernce, so I'm happy to leave in situ. -- Cassianto ( talk) 16:39, 6 May 2012 (UTC) reply
OK
I appreciate the fixes - most of which have been addressed to my satisfaction. However, I am still leaning to Oppose on prose. Once the jargon issues have been addressed and the article has been proof read to ensure words and phrases like it have been eliminated, I would be happy to show my support. -- Cassianto ( talk) 11:20, 6 May 2012 (UTC) reply
-- Cassianto ( talk) 15:36, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Comment perhaps not a problem here, but at a WP:FLC nomination, there was a strong oppose from one of the directors ( Giants2008), with this edit with drastic concerns over copyvio. Just thought it was worth noting so this process could take extra special care in this regard. All the best, The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:52, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Source review - spotchecks not done, need to be done per comment above (and a quick reminder that done templates aren't meant to be used on FAC pages, per the instructions at the top of WP:FAC). Nikkimaria ( talk) 20:39, 7 May 2012 (UTC) reply
My eyes may deceive me, but I can't find any mention of Rolf in the "Voicing" subsection.
LittleJerry (
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17:18, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
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Comment please make sure all data tables comply with MOS:DTT which includes row and col scopes for screen readers and would also advise that sortable tables should have linkable items linked every time. Also, please make sure you comply throughout with WP:DASH, there are a number of hyphens misused. The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:21, 12 May 2012 (UTC) reply
Some comments:
Overall, looks good though. Will support, pending response. Axem Titanium ( talk) 20:06, 1 June 2012 (UTC) reply
Delegate notes
Support with comment: This sentence under production, "Antonucci, an advocate of hand-drawn animation, used wobbling animation in Ed, Edd n Eddy as a homage to the hand-drawn cartoons to cartoons of the period 1940 to1980.[1]", should have a space between 'to' and '1980'.
TRLIJC19 (
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04:13, 6 July 2012 (UTC)
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Comment: Does the table of DVDs need to be on this article and the episode list? I know it's convenient, but whenever one gets edited, the other one will need to be edited too. Paper Luigi T • C 05:09, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply
Source review
Article appears to reflect sources overrall. but I did come across one that doesn't do it exactly and a deadlink.
LittleJerry (
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15:28, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
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