The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 23:54, 3 October 2009 [1].
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Comprehensive article on Australian cricketer, who captained Australia twice. He also went to the 1956 Olympics in hockey, and is a lay preacher, retired education department official. YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 05:13, 7 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Aaroncrick ( talk) 05:19, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Quickie comment: From the lead: "...had an inclination to use his feet to attack spin bowling." If I didn't know cricket I might think this meant he kicked the ball all over the place, as in soccer. It might be an idea to transfer this information to the main body of the article, where a short explanation could be added. Brianboulton ( talk) 11:36, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
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Support - See no problems except the ones raised by Tintin. They should be fixed soon. Aaroncrick ( talk) 23:40, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
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-- Jpeeling ( talk) 21:20, 15 September 2009 (UTC) reply
I will be happy to support this article once the source issue is cleared up. Awadewit ( talk) 19:19, 28 September 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 23:54, 3 October 2009 [1].
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Comprehensive article on Australian cricketer, who captained Australia twice. He also went to the 1956 Olympics in hockey, and is a lay preacher, retired education department official. YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 05:13, 7 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Aaroncrick ( talk) 05:19, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Quickie comment: From the lead: "...had an inclination to use his feet to attack spin bowling." If I didn't know cricket I might think this meant he kicked the ball all over the place, as in soccer. It might be an idea to transfer this information to the main body of the article, where a short explanation could be added. Brianboulton ( talk) 11:36, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
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Support - See no problems except the ones raised by Tintin. They should be fixed soon. Aaroncrick ( talk) 23:40, 8 September 2009 (UTC) reply
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-- Jpeeling ( talk) 21:20, 15 September 2009 (UTC) reply
I will be happy to support this article once the source issue is cleared up. Awadewit ( talk) 19:19, 28 September 2009 (UTC) reply