The article was promoted by GrahamColm 20:14, 10 March 2012 [1].
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Boletus frostii is a handsome edible bolete mushroom found in North and Central America. I've done all I can with respect to research/sourcing and tweaking prose & MoS, and think it's ready for this FAC. Thanks for reading. Sasata ( talk) 18:00, 29 February 2012 (UTC) reply
Sources look good to me, nitpicks:
Support on criteria 1a/c/d/e and 2/a/b/. Sasata, your mushroom articles always make for a delightful read. I simply could not find anything worthwile to comment on, so I took the liberty of fixing any nitpicks I had myself ( please check if I haven't altered any meanings). One suggestion: It might be useful to mention that it's a North American species in the opening sentence; at least, that's what I gathered from the article. I'm no expert on the subject, so I don't feel comfortable judging comprehensiveness, although I performed spotchecks for all uses of refs 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 9, and 10 -- I found no problems whatsoever. (For 5 and 6, I suggest linking to the pages where the quoted text appears instead.) Auree ★ ★ 03:43, 1 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Comment: Just a single comment from me regarding the wording, on what otherwise seems to be a spotless article. For the lede:
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Looks great. A few tiny quibbles-
Very well written overall. I made a couple of tiny changes. I'm sure I'll be supporting soon. J Milburn ( talk) 21:32, 4 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Support, I am happy that this is ready for featured status. J Milburn ( talk) 15:49, 5 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Support provided the image issue noted above is resolved. I couldn't find any issues, except that I disagree with Auree: "striking" is a better translation for "auffallend". Ucucha ( talk) 17:01, 7 March 2012 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by GrahamColm 20:14, 10 March 2012 [1].
Boletus frostii ( | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Boletus frostii is a handsome edible bolete mushroom found in North and Central America. I've done all I can with respect to research/sourcing and tweaking prose & MoS, and think it's ready for this FAC. Thanks for reading. Sasata ( talk) 18:00, 29 February 2012 (UTC) reply
Sources look good to me, nitpicks:
Support on criteria 1a/c/d/e and 2/a/b/. Sasata, your mushroom articles always make for a delightful read. I simply could not find anything worthwile to comment on, so I took the liberty of fixing any nitpicks I had myself ( please check if I haven't altered any meanings). One suggestion: It might be useful to mention that it's a North American species in the opening sentence; at least, that's what I gathered from the article. I'm no expert on the subject, so I don't feel comfortable judging comprehensiveness, although I performed spotchecks for all uses of refs 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 9, and 10 -- I found no problems whatsoever. (For 5 and 6, I suggest linking to the pages where the quoted text appears instead.) Auree ★ ★ 03:43, 1 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Comment: Just a single comment from me regarding the wording, on what otherwise seems to be a spotless article. For the lede:
Images
Looks great. A few tiny quibbles-
Very well written overall. I made a couple of tiny changes. I'm sure I'll be supporting soon. J Milburn ( talk) 21:32, 4 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Support, I am happy that this is ready for featured status. J Milburn ( talk) 15:49, 5 March 2012 (UTC) reply
Support provided the image issue noted above is resolved. I couldn't find any issues, except that I disagree with Auree: "striking" is a better translation for "auffallend". Ucucha ( talk) 17:01, 7 March 2012 (UTC) reply