The article was not promoted by Karanacs 17:53, 18 August 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because after major work for several months, an excruciating peer review and several other works, I feel its finally ready for FAC. The article is a GA and would be the first Delaware River crossing to reach FA if it passes. Mitch32( Want help? See here!) 15:00, 16 August 2009 (UTC) reply
* Comment Mitch, I can appreciate the work you put into this. I've read portions, and here are my comments:
None of these problems are insurmountable. I suggest you find a good copy editor (the Guild of Copy Editors would help you, probably, although possibly not in the amount of time you need for FA review), and fix the problems. But until these are fixed, I have to say Oppose on the grounds of clarity of prose and accuracy. Auntieruth55 ( talk) 19:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by Karanacs 17:53, 18 August 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because after major work for several months, an excruciating peer review and several other works, I feel its finally ready for FAC. The article is a GA and would be the first Delaware River crossing to reach FA if it passes. Mitch32( Want help? See here!) 15:00, 16 August 2009 (UTC) reply
* Comment Mitch, I can appreciate the work you put into this. I've read portions, and here are my comments:
None of these problems are insurmountable. I suggest you find a good copy editor (the Guild of Copy Editors would help you, probably, although possibly not in the amount of time you need for FA review), and fix the problems. But until these are fixed, I have to say Oppose on the grounds of clarity of prose and accuracy. Auntieruth55 ( talk) 19:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC) reply