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Arthur's death had a major impact on English history, and his article was a mess. I've edited it throughout the last week and now I am nominating this for featured article because I believe it meets FA criteria. Alex ( talk) 21:48, 12 October 2013 (UTC) reply
Drive by comment The final section on "popular culture" needs to be referenced, and would work better as prose. While I've got no idea what the availability of references is like here, it's generally preferred for such sections to provide a thematic discussion of how the person is portrayed in popular culture at FA level, rather than simply listing works in which they've appeared. Nick-D ( talk) 06:07, 13 October 2013 (UTC) reply
Great topic, worthy of FA, and I commend your efforts on the article. I think this would do better going through the good article process before FAC, as there are a few issues that could do with being ironed out.
Always happy to see topics like this at FAC. J Milburn ( talk) 08:59, 13 October 2013 (UTC) reply
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Comment The text needs some work. A few Americanisms struck a jarring note at first read-through, and there is a fair bit of WP:OVERLINK. I'll look at the page again tomorrow and make such emendations or suggestions as I can. Tim riley ( talk) 16:58, 20 October 2013 (UTC) reply
- Alex ( talk) 17:37, 24 October 2013 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by Ian Rose 10:01, 25 October 2013 (UTC) [1]. reply
Arthur, Prince of Wales ( | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Arthur's death had a major impact on English history, and his article was a mess. I've edited it throughout the last week and now I am nominating this for featured article because I believe it meets FA criteria. Alex ( talk) 21:48, 12 October 2013 (UTC) reply
Drive by comment The final section on "popular culture" needs to be referenced, and would work better as prose. While I've got no idea what the availability of references is like here, it's generally preferred for such sections to provide a thematic discussion of how the person is portrayed in popular culture at FA level, rather than simply listing works in which they've appeared. Nick-D ( talk) 06:07, 13 October 2013 (UTC) reply
Great topic, worthy of FA, and I commend your efforts on the article. I think this would do better going through the good article process before FAC, as there are a few issues that could do with being ironed out.
Always happy to see topics like this at FAC. J Milburn ( talk) 08:59, 13 October 2013 (UTC) reply
Source review - spotchecks not done
Comment The text needs some work. A few Americanisms struck a jarring note at first read-through, and there is a fair bit of WP:OVERLINK. I'll look at the page again tomorrow and make such emendations or suggestions as I can. Tim riley ( talk) 16:58, 20 October 2013 (UTC) reply
- Alex ( talk) 17:37, 24 October 2013 (UTC) reply