The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 18:13, 6 September 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because it has passed GA, received major cleanup, received a peer review, and received another major cleanup in and after the process, and received highly positive opinions on the WP:RIVER talk page. I feel this article is now referenced over enough and of a standard enough to reach FA. I know most of the river FA's are very small streams - this is the first one that flows directly into the ocean. Shannon1 talk contribs 00:27, 16 August 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment. Images need alt text as per WP:ALT. Eubulides ( talk) 07:29, 17 August 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment I intend to copyedit this and will leave questions here as I work through the article. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 14:08, 1 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Hope this helps, I can be this nitpicky for the whole article if desired, just let me know here. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 13:54, 2 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment: I thought I'd pop in here too. You've done a lot of work to get the article this far, and I'd like to see you succeed. I've done a close reading of the lead and the first section and recorded my thoughts below. If you'd like me to go on with this, I'd be glad to. Just post a note here.
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Further Finetooth comments: Thanks for your attention to many of the suggestions above. Here is another set of comments that apply down through the "Water quality" subsection.
Etymology
*Nitpick. It would be better to flip the order of the refs [8][4] to put them in ascending order, [4][8]. (done)
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The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 18:13, 6 September 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because it has passed GA, received major cleanup, received a peer review, and received another major cleanup in and after the process, and received highly positive opinions on the WP:RIVER talk page. I feel this article is now referenced over enough and of a standard enough to reach FA. I know most of the river FA's are very small streams - this is the first one that flows directly into the ocean. Shannon1 talk contribs 00:27, 16 August 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment. Images need alt text as per WP:ALT. Eubulides ( talk) 07:29, 17 August 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment I intend to copyedit this and will leave questions here as I work through the article. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 14:08, 1 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Hope this helps, I can be this nitpicky for the whole article if desired, just let me know here. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 13:54, 2 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment: I thought I'd pop in here too. You've done a lot of work to get the article this far, and I'd like to see you succeed. I've done a close reading of the lead and the first section and recorded my thoughts below. If you'd like me to go on with this, I'd be glad to. Just post a note here.
Lead
Name
Further Finetooth comments: Thanks for your attention to many of the suggestions above. Here is another set of comments that apply down through the "Water quality" subsection.
Etymology
*Nitpick. It would be better to flip the order of the refs [8][4] to put them in ascending order, [4][8]. (done)
Course
Discharge
Geology
Geography
Water quality