The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 18:41, 27 January 2009 [1].
Hello everyone! I've been working on this article since October-ish, and I think that it is finally ready after beautiful copy-edits from La Pianista and Icy, a little help on the side from Julian and Little Mountain 5 and the greatly appreciated offer from Colosseum to let me use a beautiful image he drew in the article. Anyway, stopping this before I violate WP:TLDR. :) Thanks and cheers, — Ed 17 (Talk / Contribs) 18:18, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 19:27, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
These issues should be easy to resolve and I look forward to striking this objection quickly. Awadewit ( talk) 23:36, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments -
Oppose Support - In no way were these ships "the last true dreadnoughts to fly the U.S. Flag". Nor does the cited source claim they do.
The Land (
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13:39, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
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Comments This does need a fair amount of MOS cleanup and prose tightening. I gave it a first pass copyedit/MOS workup, but I've skipped the entire armament section as I have a tremendous headache. Please revisit the presentation of armament names and conversions. The CommonsCat link ought to be moved to the External links section, and both of the See also links look like they should be evaluated for inclusion within the article text. Maralia ( talk) 05:25, 24 January 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 18:41, 27 January 2009 [1].
Hello everyone! I've been working on this article since October-ish, and I think that it is finally ready after beautiful copy-edits from La Pianista and Icy, a little help on the side from Julian and Little Mountain 5 and the greatly appreciated offer from Colosseum to let me use a beautiful image he drew in the article. Anyway, stopping this before I violate WP:TLDR. :) Thanks and cheers, — Ed 17 (Talk / Contribs) 18:18, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 19:27, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
These issues should be easy to resolve and I look forward to striking this objection quickly. Awadewit ( talk) 23:36, 3 January 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments -
Oppose Support - In no way were these ships "the last true dreadnoughts to fly the U.S. Flag". Nor does the cited source claim they do.
The Land (
talk)
13:39, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
reply
Comments This does need a fair amount of MOS cleanup and prose tightening. I gave it a first pass copyedit/MOS workup, but I've skipped the entire armament section as I have a tremendous headache. Please revisit the presentation of armament names and conversions. The CommonsCat link ought to be moved to the External links section, and both of the See also links look like they should be evaluated for inclusion within the article text. Maralia ( talk) 05:25, 24 January 2009 (UTC) reply