The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 00:34, 12 December 2009 [1].
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A-class Military History Article. Was not promoted on its last FA review because of a lack of feedback from any users. — Ed! (talk) 18:13, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments Some minor stuff.
-- an odd name 20:01, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment (2c will follow later) Fifelfoo ( talk) 22:32, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment - I think File:7InfDivRightDUI.gif should in SVG format. Try requesting at WP:GL. Connormah ( talk) 23:37, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments - Support
Looks like a nice article, I look forward to supporting in time. Dana boomer ( talk) 20:31, 26 November 2009 (UTC) reply
- Staxringold talk contribs 17:28, 9 December 2009 (UTC) reply
Oppose until the prose is signficantly improved. An independent copy-edit is required. Here are samples at the top.
See User:Tony1/Redundancy exercises: removing fluff from your writing and Wikipedia:WikiProject_Military_history/Academy/Copy-editing_essentials. Tony (talk) 14:29, 11 December 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 00:34, 12 December 2009 [1].
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A-class Military History Article. Was not promoted on its last FA review because of a lack of feedback from any users. — Ed! (talk) 18:13, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments Some minor stuff.
-- an odd name 20:01, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment (2c will follow later) Fifelfoo ( talk) 22:32, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment - I think File:7InfDivRightDUI.gif should in SVG format. Try requesting at WP:GL. Connormah ( talk) 23:37, 20 November 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments - Support
Looks like a nice article, I look forward to supporting in time. Dana boomer ( talk) 20:31, 26 November 2009 (UTC) reply
- Staxringold talk contribs 17:28, 9 December 2009 (UTC) reply
Oppose until the prose is signficantly improved. An independent copy-edit is required. Here are samples at the top.
See User:Tony1/Redundancy exercises: removing fluff from your writing and Wikipedia:WikiProject_Military_history/Academy/Copy-editing_essentials. Tony (talk) 14:29, 11 December 2009 (UTC) reply