The article was promoted by Gog the Mild via FACBot ( talk) 19 September 2022 [1].
It may surprise you to learn that I don't get to see a lot of professional snooker live. This was the second event I managed to get to in the last five years. A superb week in a great venue - with some images taken during the event in the article. The Welsh Open is often a good but minor event, but for two years straight has had a great narrative. The previous year's winner Jordan Brown won his first event, ranked 80th in the world. This year, perennial journeyman Joe Perry won the event, defeating the majorly in-form Ricky Walden in the quarter-finals, Jack Lisowski (who had won a match of the season contender against Ali Carter in the round prior), a serial winner Judd Trump in the final to win his second ranking event, the first being a minor 2015 Players Tour Championship Grand Final win. Perry's win was at age 47, the second oldest winner of a ranking event (at the time). A great event, and hopefully a well written and researched article. Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 11:01, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Prose review:
Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 ( talk) 20:16, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Sources (not a full source review)
I had a look at the Snooker Scene refs:
Format
Final
Infobox and Lead
@ Lee Vilenski: that's all I could see; unsurprisingly not very much as I had reviewed this for GA. Thanks for your work on the article. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 12:42, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
"one of my biggest buzzes since I've been a pro".should have the full stop inside the quotation mark per MOS:INOROUT
If the quotation is a single word or a sentence fragment, place the terminal punctuation outside the closing quotation mark. The quote is only a fragment of the full sentence in the quote. I might be wrong though. Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 11:16, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
(ref numbers refer to this version)
Have to head off now, will continue looking later. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 12:40, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
That's about it for now... quite a lot of issues identified, although in fairness many of them are repetitions of the same issue throughout, e.g. BBC Sport articles consistently missing author and date. I will come back for another pass once these are addressed. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 09:26, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
@ Lee Vilenski: Sorry for the delay returning to this. I'm satisfied with formatting etc. now. Will move on to spot checks: This version checked.
I might check one or two more when you've responded to these points, but no major concerns. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 15:38, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
Image review
Hi Gog the Mild, I'm just awaiting Amakuru's response for the source review - any chance I can push another one into the fire when I get a support? Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 10:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
The article was promoted by Gog the Mild via FACBot ( talk) 19 September 2022 [1].
It may surprise you to learn that I don't get to see a lot of professional snooker live. This was the second event I managed to get to in the last five years. A superb week in a great venue - with some images taken during the event in the article. The Welsh Open is often a good but minor event, but for two years straight has had a great narrative. The previous year's winner Jordan Brown won his first event, ranked 80th in the world. This year, perennial journeyman Joe Perry won the event, defeating the majorly in-form Ricky Walden in the quarter-finals, Jack Lisowski (who had won a match of the season contender against Ali Carter in the round prior), a serial winner Judd Trump in the final to win his second ranking event, the first being a minor 2015 Players Tour Championship Grand Final win. Perry's win was at age 47, the second oldest winner of a ranking event (at the time). A great event, and hopefully a well written and researched article. Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 11:01, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Prose review:
Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 ( talk) 20:16, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Sources (not a full source review)
I had a look at the Snooker Scene refs:
Format
Final
Infobox and Lead
@ Lee Vilenski: that's all I could see; unsurprisingly not very much as I had reviewed this for GA. Thanks for your work on the article. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 12:42, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
"one of my biggest buzzes since I've been a pro".should have the full stop inside the quotation mark per MOS:INOROUT
If the quotation is a single word or a sentence fragment, place the terminal punctuation outside the closing quotation mark. The quote is only a fragment of the full sentence in the quote. I might be wrong though. Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 11:16, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
(ref numbers refer to this version)
Have to head off now, will continue looking later. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 12:40, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
That's about it for now... quite a lot of issues identified, although in fairness many of them are repetitions of the same issue throughout, e.g. BBC Sport articles consistently missing author and date. I will come back for another pass once these are addressed. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 09:26, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
@ Lee Vilenski: Sorry for the delay returning to this. I'm satisfied with formatting etc. now. Will move on to spot checks: This version checked.
I might check one or two more when you've responded to these points, but no major concerns. Cheers — Amakuru ( talk) 15:38, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
Image review
Hi Gog the Mild, I'm just awaiting Amakuru's response for the source review - any chance I can push another one into the fire when I get a support? Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 10:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)