The article is biased, grammatically unsound, and difficult to read. Facts, such as they are presented are not cited and the article is riddled with rhetorical questions that seem more like News headlines than Wikipedia article content. I will try cleaning this myself, but am unsure of what to do, having minimal Wikipedia editing skills.
Any help is appreciated.
capyash ( talk) 06:36, 7 April 2011 (UTC)capyash
The article is biased, grammatically unsound, and difficult to read. Facts, such as they are presented are not cited and the article is riddled with rhetorical questions that seem more like News headlines than Wikipedia article content. I will try cleaning this myself, but am unsure of what to do, having minimal Wikipedia editing skills.
Any help is appreciated.
capyash ( talk) 06:36, 7 April 2011 (UTC)capyash