- A simple read of the article will demonstrate why it needs to be cleaned up, particularlar the latter portion of the second part of the article user:64.236.170.4
- Tagged as stub in both sociology and culture. RJFJR 15:26, 28 October 2005 (UTC)
- It has a POV tag on it. RJFJR 15:26, 28 October 2005 (UTC)
- The POV tags keeps being removed, while the POV problem seems to remain. Bergsten 18:47, 31 October 2005 (UTC)
- Yup, POV and poor grammar. This article actually concerns things that interest me, but how to clean it up effectively is beyond me. I think it may be a deletion candidate. -- Marnen Laibow-Koser ( talk) ( desk) 05:49, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
- I think the grammer can be dealt with. I may take this up. Eagle ( talk) ( desk) 21:31, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
- I did a lot of low-level rewriting. If someone feels the need to remove any templates, then by all means, do so. AnonMoos 22:44, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
- Thank you. You really helped with the NPOV problem
Why has no one contacted the Disciplinary Wives Club to get input? They are the most credible and reliable group on the Internet as far as Domestic Discipline with women leading.
- A simple read of the article will demonstrate why it needs to be cleaned up, particularlar the latter portion of the second part of the article user:64.236.170.4
- Tagged as stub in both sociology and culture. RJFJR 15:26, 28 October 2005 (UTC)
- It has a POV tag on it. RJFJR 15:26, 28 October 2005 (UTC)
- The POV tags keeps being removed, while the POV problem seems to remain. Bergsten 18:47, 31 October 2005 (UTC)
- Yup, POV and poor grammar. This article actually concerns things that interest me, but how to clean it up effectively is beyond me. I think it may be a deletion candidate. -- Marnen Laibow-Koser ( talk) ( desk) 05:49, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
- I think the grammer can be dealt with. I may take this up. Eagle ( talk) ( desk) 21:31, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
- I did a lot of low-level rewriting. If someone feels the need to remove any templates, then by all means, do so. AnonMoos 22:44, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
- Thank you. You really helped with the NPOV problem
Why has no one contacted the Disciplinary Wives Club to get input? They are the most credible and reliable group on the Internet as far as Domestic Discipline with women leading.