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- Listings from 2010
2010 Information
December
- Taveta, Kenya - This page must be revised: Link does not work any more, Kilimanjaro was not given by the Queen ( Mount Kilimanjaro#Name), Tanzania is no longer socialist. Peter in s ( talk) 06:57, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
November
- 1985 National League Championship Series - Needs to be heavily revised for tone (for the most demonstrative passages, see the section on Game 4). This is Wikipedia, not ESPN. -- STUART ( talk) 07:26, 20 November 2010 (UTC)
- Atlantic City Conference is extremely long and wordy. It could also use many citations. -- Ultima Designs ( talk) 14:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
October
- Dawoodi Bohra Needs clean up with grammar and spelling. - Sherenk1 ( talk) 06:32, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
- El Salvador national football team Needs reliable sources.
September
- Eudokia Komnene has confused 2 individuals and is therefore incorrect, on the whole.
- Indian Music Industry needs more references and information. -- MrFawwaz ( talk) 12:00, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Yelahanka has multiple issues : wikification, bad grammar, and poor formatting. Can be considered either for clean-up or deletion. -- Cae prince ( talk) 07:18, 20 September 2010 (UTC)
- Reference added – Rice, B. Lewis (2004). "Mysore: a gazetteer compiled for government". Karnataka Gazetteer. pp. 40–48. Retrieved February 24, 2012. Northamerica1000 (talk) 12:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
August
- SLI has two sections which need wikification and the article itself has insufficient in-line references. John Aplessed ( talk)
- Civics In the table, all types of civic theory need citation except the first two.
- Balby Carr Community Sports College.
- Hands_(The_Ting_Tings_song) needs work on references.
- Fair Spend needs wikification and more references. ( talk)
July
- Lady Audley's Secret Uses colloquial rather than encyclopedic language. Jackiespeel ( talk) 18:14, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
- George Everest: Article not the right place to remark on the state of disrepair of his former residence (even if something #should# be done about it). Jackiespeel ( talk) 15:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
- Art vs Science Needs heavy tone editing, as the person who wrote the article obviously hates the band. *This article has been rewritten. It still needs to be rewritten yet again, but it's a much better sight.*
- Gods and Generals (video game) Uses weasel words a bit too much. Also, it desperately needs reliable sources.
| This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
| Archive 1 | Archive 2 | Archive 3 | → | Archive 5 |
- Listings from 2010
2010 Information
December
- Taveta, Kenya - This page must be revised: Link does not work any more, Kilimanjaro was not given by the Queen ( Mount Kilimanjaro#Name), Tanzania is no longer socialist. Peter in s ( talk) 06:57, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
November
- 1985 National League Championship Series - Needs to be heavily revised for tone (for the most demonstrative passages, see the section on Game 4). This is Wikipedia, not ESPN. -- STUART ( talk) 07:26, 20 November 2010 (UTC)
- Atlantic City Conference is extremely long and wordy. It could also use many citations. -- Ultima Designs ( talk) 14:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
October
- Dawoodi Bohra Needs clean up with grammar and spelling. - Sherenk1 ( talk) 06:32, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
- El Salvador national football team Needs reliable sources.
September
- Eudokia Komnene has confused 2 individuals and is therefore incorrect, on the whole.
- Indian Music Industry needs more references and information. -- MrFawwaz ( talk) 12:00, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Yelahanka has multiple issues : wikification, bad grammar, and poor formatting. Can be considered either for clean-up or deletion. -- Cae prince ( talk) 07:18, 20 September 2010 (UTC)
- Reference added – Rice, B. Lewis (2004). "Mysore: a gazetteer compiled for government". Karnataka Gazetteer. pp. 40–48. Retrieved February 24, 2012. Northamerica1000 (talk) 12:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
August
- SLI has two sections which need wikification and the article itself has insufficient in-line references. John Aplessed ( talk)
- Civics In the table, all types of civic theory need citation except the first two.
- Balby Carr Community Sports College.
- Hands_(The_Ting_Tings_song) needs work on references.
- Fair Spend needs wikification and more references. ( talk)
July
- Lady Audley's Secret Uses colloquial rather than encyclopedic language. Jackiespeel ( talk) 18:14, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
- George Everest: Article not the right place to remark on the state of disrepair of his former residence (even if something #should# be done about it). Jackiespeel ( talk) 15:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
- Art vs Science Needs heavy tone editing, as the person who wrote the article obviously hates the band. *This article has been rewritten. It still needs to be rewritten yet again, but it's a much better sight.*
- Gods and Generals (video game) Uses weasel words a bit too much. Also, it desperately needs reliable sources.