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The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was delete. The general thrust of the discussion is the same as in Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Twitter Power (2nd nomination). But unlike there, in this discussion the "delete" or "userfy" opinions outweigh the "keep" opinions by more than two to one. I am content to call this a consensus for deletion (with possible userfication if requested) because unlike perhaps some other related articles, the notability of this topic is argued to be borderline, and two of the three "keep" opinions don't really address that.  Sandstein  08:48, 20 September 2015 (UTC) reply

The Next Internet Millionaire

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Renominating in the hope of getting consensus. This is part of a promotional series of articles, for Joel Comm, some or all of them written by paid editors.

Lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion. Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason. Small variations to the notability standard either way do not fundamentally harm the encycopedia, but accepting articles that are part of a promotional campaign causes great damage. Once we become a vehicle for promotion, we're useless as an encycopedia .

I think we need to stop tolerating this sort of article. DGG ( talk ) 23:14, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Delete Yes it's borderline N. Patience has run out for this self-promotion. It also isn't a) a film b) television or c) been broadcast. I've removed those three claims. Yes, I agree 100% with DGG. This is part of deciding where our boundaries are. It's basically WP:TOOSOON to see if this was something important in the evolution of video. Looking at the timescale, maybe it wasn't. Else it's NOTNEWS. Reading the sources - Wired wasn't sure to take this seriously. What standard do we want to be? Less than NEWS? Promotion is dilution of our only worth. Widefox; talk 23:48, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • See also: Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard/Archive_87 § The_Next_Internet_Millionaire
  • I rewrote the article during the last AfD and have no conflict of interest with the subject. The rewritten article is not promotional. DGG has failed in the last AfD and this AfD to explain precisely how the article's content is promotional. That an earlier draft of the article was written by a COI editor is a terrible deletion reason for the current revision written by a non-COI editor. Cunard ( talk) 23:52, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply
(to summarise below big ref blob) No complete rewrite was done before (it may have been done now by both of us). There was several inaccuracies in the original parts (not done by you or I). Widefox; talk 01:19, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Keep per the significant coverage in multiple independent reliable sources. Excellent research from 23W ( talk · contribs) at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The Next Internet Millionaire.
    1. Johnson, Kimberly S. (2007-07-30). "Who wants to be an internet millionaire?". The Denver Post. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      A Loveland entrepreneur who has reportedly made millions with his online ventures is trying to do the same for others - with a reality-TV twist.

      Joel Comm, who sold his first business to Yahoo Inc. in 1997, is the co-creator and host of "The Next Internet Millionaire," an "Apprentice"- type reality show being filmed in Loveland. The show will be aired exclusively online beginning Aug. 15.

      ...

      Twelve contestants from the U.S., Canada, Costa Rica and England were chosen based on videos they submitted to the show. The videos also appeared on YouTube. Web users had a chance to weigh in on the final 12, but the choice was ultimately up to Comm.

      Hundreds of people submitted video entries. The six men and six women are competing for $25,000 and the chance to develop a joint venture with Comm.

      ...

      The show has several sponsors and a crew of 15, who are following the contestants as they complete their tasks. Comm wouldn't say how much he's spending to produce the show but said it totals more than the production budget of the independent film "Napoleon Dynamite," which according to Box officemojo.com. was $400,000.

      The show also brings in "teachers" or experts in various Web fields to help guide the contestants through their tasks. Dave Taylor, a Boulder-based blogging and Internet guru, is expected to make an appearance during taping this week.

    2. Strange, Adario (2007-06-05). "The Next Internet Millionaire: Startup As Reality TV". Wired. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.
    3. Strange, Adario (2007-08-20). "'The Next Internet Millionaire' Launches First Episode". Wired. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      The new "Next Internet Millionaire" production is slicker, more professional, and easily something you might find on broadcast television. Whether that’s good or bad, you decide. The point is, this no longer looks like a fly-by-night hustle job. The show now has a host, legitimate sponsors from the technology space and, dare we say it, a couple of interesting moments. Although the reality show genre is pretty much DOA at this point, emerging online video show creators should note the way this show quickly ramped up the quality—this is your new competition.

    4. Middleton, Diana (2007-07-27). "Reality no obstacle for these entrepreneurs: Despite rejection by reality shows, their businesses thrive; they plan to expand". The Florida Times-Union. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.
    5. Middleton, Diana (2007-06-23). "The next Internet millionaire?: Local businesswoman in the running to win big through an online reality show". The Florida Times-Union. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      So far, Chance has survived the first round of voting, which whittled 300 applicants to a pool of 50. The online voting, which will count for 30 percent of her second round score, ends Wednesday. Should Chance make it to the next round, she'll be in the running for a trip to Colorado, where 12 finalists will be filmed competing for the top prize: $25,000 and the chance to form a joint venture with the show's creator, Internet marketer Joel Comm. While competing for the top prize, contestants will be "taught" how to make more money online by a panel of "Internet marketing experts," many of whom sell their own lines of books based on their money-making tactics. They will also compete in challenges similar to those on television.

      Show creator Comm, an Internet marketer, claims to have all the tools to squeeze profitability from Internet ventures. He owns several domains ranging from online coupons to a personal blog. However, one of Comm's more notable Web sites, the family-friendly World Village, has seen rapidly declining traffic, with the number of global Internet users visiting the site dropping 37 percent within 3 months, according to Alexa, a Web tracking company.

    6. Amos, James (2007-06-27). "Classes to focus on Internet opportunities". The Pueblo Chieftain. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17 – via HighBeam Research. {{ cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) ( help)
    7. Zuckerberg, Randi (2008-11-18). "Online, Reality TV Gets Even More Absurd". The Daily Beast. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      The Next Internet Millionaire

      This show aired in the fall of 2007 and pulled out all the stops: a high-drama entrance by host Joel Comm in a stretch Expedition limo, a panel of expert judges, and stunt-based tasks aimed at sending the contestants packing. The key fault in this otherwise slickly produced show about the oh-so-glamorous world of, um, internet marketing was the host, internet geek—I mean, web marketing guru (and shameless self-promoter)—Joel Comm. Canadian Jaime Luchuck was declared the winner, and Joel is surely proud: she too now hawks her book From Cubicle Slave to the Next Internet Millionaire online. (Even better, when you try to navigate away from her site, you get every annoying pop-up ad ever created, making you wish internet marketing never existed in the first place.) You can also tune in to Joel Comm’s new YouTube self-celebration, The Dot Comm Story.

    8. Riley, Duncan (2007-10-04). "The Next Internet Millionaire: Inspired Programming Or Lame Sales Front". TechCrunch. Archived from the original on 2015-09-13. Retrieved 2015-09-13.
    9. "Ex-Reginan wins online game show". Leader-Post. Canwest. 2007-11-23. Archived from the original on 2015-09-13. Retrieved 2015-09-13.
    There is sufficient coverage in reliable sources to allow The Next Internet Millionaire to pass Wikipedia:Notability#General notability guideline, which requires "significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject".

    Cunard ( talk) 23:52, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply

    • User:Cunard the parts you left (lede and cats) were wrong (my comment above is after your rewrite). The lede is still by the original COI and needs fixing. I put the COI back as the COI has relevance and (from my perspective) pertinent to the AfD. No prejudice about removing once above mentioned, AfD (and cleanup) done. Widefox; talk 00:52, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
      • The lead says:

        The Next Internet Millionaire is an online reality show hosted by Joel Comm and written and directed by Eric Holmlund. Billed as the world's first Internet reality show and based on the popular NBC show The Apprentice, the program was released entirely on the Internet in 2007.

        I've revised this to:

        The Next Internet Millionaire is an online reality show hosted by Joel Comm and written and directed by Eric Holmlund. Based on the NBC show The Apprentice, the program was released entirely on the Internet in 2007.

        The sole category is Category:Reality web series, which is accurate.

        I think this is accurate and neutral. Does this satisfy your concerns? If yes, please remove the {{ COI}} tag. Thanks, Cunard ( talk) 00:56, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Content wise, I'm not yet buying that it's completely OK - it hasn't been completely rewritten has it? Maybe at least 1. lede 2. Primary claim of it being the online Apprentice. I've given two other (painstakingly researched) reasons above. Although the COI edits are before the new TOU, the bigger picture is why I'm here. Appreciate you've fixed the content. How can these two tangential aspects be reconciled? Maybe leave it a week? Widefox; talk 01:03, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
The lead says it is based on The Apprentice. This is supported by this article in The Florida Times-Union, which says:

The Next Internet Millionaire bills itself as an online version of shows like The Apprentice, which pit ambitious businesspeople against each other for a lucrative business deal for the winner.

Therefore, the lead is supported by the source. You wrote "the parts you left (lede and cats) were wrong".

Since you removed the category Category:American reality television series, the categorization now is accurate. Since I cleaned up the lead, the lead is now accurate. Do you have any outstanding concerns about the article's prose, which I completely rewrote?

Leaving the COI tag is unhelpful because the article has been rewritten by a non-COI editor. The cleanup is done. There is no reason to keep it up during the AfD because it wrongly indicates that the cleanup is not done and biases editors towards supporting deletion.

Cunard ( talk) 01:15, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Good. The content is finally rewritten. Do you agree it's worth being cautious about a big promo/sockfarm/COI mess. You know we're evaluating this as part of the biggest one this year/ever? I welcome further scrutiny considering, and that's why this COI tag AfD is here, indicating to AfD participants that aspect (which may, or may not be 100% solved content wise now - you agree it wasn't after your original rewrite, right?). Disclosure of the catalyst (from my perspective) for the AfD isn't about biasing. My two reasons to keep are not challenged. Widefox; talk 01:32, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I completely rewrote the body of the article. I did not touch the lead, which I now have done by removing an unsourced part. The inaccurate category is a very minor issue. I don't find the tag helpful since as you've admitted, "The content is finally rewritten." Since the article was rewritten, the tag now is obsolete. But in the interest of not edit warring with you, I'll remove it after the AfD is closed. Cunard ( talk) 02:30, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • With the rules currently stated, we have the inverse of how voluntary organisations run: Volunteers with responsibilities, and staff (undisclosed paid editors) with none. Rewriting bad paid content with good volunteer content results in hiring a BOGOF editor. We're subsidising the market. This is not sustainable. Dare to say it, WP:IAR. Widefox; talk 03:56, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
That's not fair, you chose to be in that BOGOF position. Your hard work results, in effect, of subsidising the (clandestine/illegal) market. WP/WM as an org should not set up people for failure, we need actual solutions to tackle the illegal market, and BOGOF does the opposite - incentivises it. You were fully aware it was a COI rescue (a BOGOF). You cannot afterwards complain. Short term - good work, long term - destructive market force. Of course, if you can promise to fix all COI / TOU articles yes no problem. How can you even ask others to join you? It's counterproductive (per DGG), it's wikt:give hostage to fortune. (see also Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Circle (company) ) Widefox; talk 12:02, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Wow, this really turns the situation on its head. An editor attaching his good reputation to a tainted topic and asking that it be retained on that basis? Wow. I'm jumping in now with my !vote. — Brianhe ( talk) 05:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete - another piece to promote Joel Comm. Purely promotional and obviously a case of someone 'mistakenly' believing that Wikipedia is another LinkedIn, not understanding the difference between an Encyclopedia and a comercial networking site or the Yellow Pages. Whether it is part of the Orangemoody paid spamming campaign or not, DGG has said all that needs to be said already. Wikipedia cannot be allowed to be used for profit in this way at the abuse of the voluntary unpaid time that dedicated users spend building this encyclopedia which in spite of some biographies and articles about some companies, was never intended to be an additional business networking platform. Whether the text itself sounds promotional or not, the article is an advert and a plethora of sources has never been an automatic assumption of notability.-- Kudpung กุดผึ้ง ( talk) 17:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
See WP:NOTPOINTy - there's making a point, and there's disrupting to make a point. In the short term this could be seen as POINTY, long-term we need to decide what's best as BOGOF editing may be seen as POINTY. We're an encyclopaedia not a newspaper WP:NOTADVERTISING, WP:NOTNEWS, WP:10YT. If the subject is worthy we should include it, it could be argued that there's competing disruptive forces here, but let's be clear and agree one thing, WP is not a promo platform and there's no place for undisclosed COI / paid editing. That's the disruption. Mopping up after isn't (whichever form that may take). Widefox; talk 08:32, 18 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete per Kudpung's emerging BOGO philosophy nicely articulated above, and DGG's "lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion" (my emphasis). WP articles shouldn't be a way to start a crummy PR fluff piece and have volunteers finish it in order to promote a company/book/person. — Brianhe ( talk) 05:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I'm unaware of anyone else coining the phrase before I did, but it was me that called it BOGOF. Widefox; talk 21:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete It seems that this proliferation of articles all about the same marginally notable topic should be gathered into one article written by someone other than Cunard, who, no matter how independent he or she may be, still seems to have a tough time writing an NPOV article that complies with Wikipedia guidelines on promotionalism. See comments above. -- Bejnar ( talk) 00:07, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Your accusation that I've written a promotional article and violated NPOV is vague but hurtful. I've striven for NPOV in The Next Internet Millionaire by including all points of view from the reliable sources about the subject.

    Here is the "Reception" section of the article:

    Wired reviewer Adario Strange said The Next Internet Millionaire was "slicker, more professional, and easily something you might find on broadcast television". Randi Zuckerberg criticized the show in The Daily Beast, writing, "The key fault in this otherwise slickly produced show about the oh-so-glamorous world of, um, internet marketing was the host, internet geek—I mean, web marketing guru (and shameless self-promoter)—Joel Comm."

    Riley Duncan of TechCrunch said he was unsure about whether to praise or criticize the show, writing, "On the one hand it's slickly produced and some of the expert advice is worth watching, particularly if you're in the ebook ... sorry Internet Marketing business. Yet on the other hand you just know that the whole show is a front for Joel Comm Inc; a vehicle from which he can further expose himself to a broader audience and ultimately sell more ebooks and related products."

    The Wired review is positive. The Daily Beast is negative, calling Joel Comm a "shameless self-promoter". TechCrunch has a mixed review, noting the show can be educational but that it is just "a front" for self-promoter Joel Comm. This presentation is compliant with Wikipedia:Neutral point of view#Balance.

    Cunard ( talk) 04:29, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Yes, it is Cunard's right as an editor to rewrite, and that right should be defended. Widefox; talk 21:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
My apologies, I didn't intend to slight any personal individual Wikipedia editor themselves. I merely meant the tone itself came across as a bit promotional. I'll have to take another look to try to make more specific suggestions for improvement. Good luck to you, — Cirt ( talk) 03:43, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Update: Okay so the Reception sect appears to have only three sources or so with scant discussion in an in-depth nature. Perhaps you could first try expanding that particular sect with maybe at least three times as many sources and paraphrase (instead of quote) some of the discussion to see that way if it goes into greater depth. Just a suggestion, — Cirt ( talk) 03:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • No worries, Cirt ( talk · contribs). Thank you for your helpful suggestion for improvement. The quotes in the "Reception" section definitely can be shortened, which I've done. I've shortened the quotes to be just several words instead of several sentences.

    I've reviewed the sources again, and I think only Wired, The Daily Beast, and TechCrunch comment about what they like and dislike about the show. The other two three, The Denver Post, Canwest, and The Florida Times-Union, don't comment about what they like and dislike about the show, so I was unable to include them in the "Reception" section.

    Cunard ( talk) 04:17, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Cirt ( talk · contribs), are there any other changes I can make to address your concerns about the tone being too promotional? I am unable to expand the "Reception" section because only three sources review it. I don't want my hours of work on this notable topic to be wasted by the article's deletion. Cunard ( talk) 17:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete - DGG says it best, "Lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion. Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason." And I'm not even sure this reaches the classification of borderline notability. Onel5969 TT me 16:46, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason.

    How is there "clear promotionalism"? Please point out specific instances of the article of promotionalism so I can fix them. I have no connection with the subject and rewrote the article because I found the subject notable.

    There is no borderline notability. The subject is clearly notable for having received significant coverage in Wired, The Daily Beast, TechCrunch, The Denver Post, Canwest, and The Florida Times-Union.

    Cunard ( talk) 17:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Userfy. I thank Cunard for the improvements taking my above comments into consideration. It's a shame more Reception wasn't able to be found, at least not yet. Perhaps userfy is the best option, for now, so further research can be done. Without prejudice to recreation in main article space at any point in time after that, with quality improvement beforehand, hopefully. — Cirt ( talk) 17:59, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I feel for ya, maybe try HighBeam Research, and also other archival online database resources that might be accessible via your local library like LexisNexis or NewsBank ? — Cirt ( talk) 18:08, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I've already tried HighBeam Research which returned two articles from The Florida Times-Union and one article from The Pueblo Chieftain (all three of which I have already listed above). NewsBank lists the same sources mentioned above. I do not have access to LexisNexis.

I think the article in its current state is acceptable since it's neutral and reliably sourced. Although I too would like to expand the "Reception" section, I am unable to because no other available sources discuss The Next Internet Millionaire. With seven sources, there is enough material to establish notability per Wikipedia:Notability#General notability guideline, so would you consider supporting keeping the article?

Cunard ( talk) 18:29, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

You might try LexisNexis which you could access at your local library, or ask for help from the reference librarian. Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Library might be able to help you out. — Cirt ( talk) 18:48, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
My local library does not have LexisNexis access and nor does Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Library. If you have access to LexisNexis, would you please check for The Next Internet Millionaire articles for me? Cunard ( talk) 19:50, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete as promotional. – the rewritten article is not promotional. Please specifically point out where you believe it's promotional.

    While I applaud the efforts of Cunard (and others) to research references, this is simply the wrong place to be directing those energies. – it is not your place to direct volunteer editors where to direct their energies.

    Once the selection criteria is biased, no cleanup efforts can correct that bias. – this is wrong per Wikipedia:Editing policy#Wikipedia is a work in progress: perfection is not required. I have corrected any Wikipedia:Neutral point of view issues here. It is false to say that once a non-neutral article has been created, its issues never can be remedied.

    That you don't like the topic because of its origins is not a valid reason to delete a rewritten neutral article about a notable topic.

    Cunard ( talk) 02:31, 20 September 2015 (UTC) reply

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The result was delete. The general thrust of the discussion is the same as in Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Twitter Power (2nd nomination). But unlike there, in this discussion the "delete" or "userfy" opinions outweigh the "keep" opinions by more than two to one. I am content to call this a consensus for deletion (with possible userfication if requested) because unlike perhaps some other related articles, the notability of this topic is argued to be borderline, and two of the three "keep" opinions don't really address that.  Sandstein  08:48, 20 September 2015 (UTC) reply

The Next Internet Millionaire

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The Next Internet Millionaire (  | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) – ( View log · Stats)
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Renominating in the hope of getting consensus. This is part of a promotional series of articles, for Joel Comm, some or all of them written by paid editors.

Lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion. Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason. Small variations to the notability standard either way do not fundamentally harm the encycopedia, but accepting articles that are part of a promotional campaign causes great damage. Once we become a vehicle for promotion, we're useless as an encycopedia .

I think we need to stop tolerating this sort of article. DGG ( talk ) 23:14, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Delete Yes it's borderline N. Patience has run out for this self-promotion. It also isn't a) a film b) television or c) been broadcast. I've removed those three claims. Yes, I agree 100% with DGG. This is part of deciding where our boundaries are. It's basically WP:TOOSOON to see if this was something important in the evolution of video. Looking at the timescale, maybe it wasn't. Else it's NOTNEWS. Reading the sources - Wired wasn't sure to take this seriously. What standard do we want to be? Less than NEWS? Promotion is dilution of our only worth. Widefox; talk 23:48, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • See also: Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard/Archive_87 § The_Next_Internet_Millionaire
  • I rewrote the article during the last AfD and have no conflict of interest with the subject. The rewritten article is not promotional. DGG has failed in the last AfD and this AfD to explain precisely how the article's content is promotional. That an earlier draft of the article was written by a COI editor is a terrible deletion reason for the current revision written by a non-COI editor. Cunard ( talk) 23:52, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply
(to summarise below big ref blob) No complete rewrite was done before (it may have been done now by both of us). There was several inaccuracies in the original parts (not done by you or I). Widefox; talk 01:19, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Keep per the significant coverage in multiple independent reliable sources. Excellent research from 23W ( talk · contribs) at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The Next Internet Millionaire.
    1. Johnson, Kimberly S. (2007-07-30). "Who wants to be an internet millionaire?". The Denver Post. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      A Loveland entrepreneur who has reportedly made millions with his online ventures is trying to do the same for others - with a reality-TV twist.

      Joel Comm, who sold his first business to Yahoo Inc. in 1997, is the co-creator and host of "The Next Internet Millionaire," an "Apprentice"- type reality show being filmed in Loveland. The show will be aired exclusively online beginning Aug. 15.

      ...

      Twelve contestants from the U.S., Canada, Costa Rica and England were chosen based on videos they submitted to the show. The videos also appeared on YouTube. Web users had a chance to weigh in on the final 12, but the choice was ultimately up to Comm.

      Hundreds of people submitted video entries. The six men and six women are competing for $25,000 and the chance to develop a joint venture with Comm.

      ...

      The show has several sponsors and a crew of 15, who are following the contestants as they complete their tasks. Comm wouldn't say how much he's spending to produce the show but said it totals more than the production budget of the independent film "Napoleon Dynamite," which according to Box officemojo.com. was $400,000.

      The show also brings in "teachers" or experts in various Web fields to help guide the contestants through their tasks. Dave Taylor, a Boulder-based blogging and Internet guru, is expected to make an appearance during taping this week.

    2. Strange, Adario (2007-06-05). "The Next Internet Millionaire: Startup As Reality TV". Wired. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.
    3. Strange, Adario (2007-08-20). "'The Next Internet Millionaire' Launches First Episode". Wired. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      The new "Next Internet Millionaire" production is slicker, more professional, and easily something you might find on broadcast television. Whether that’s good or bad, you decide. The point is, this no longer looks like a fly-by-night hustle job. The show now has a host, legitimate sponsors from the technology space and, dare we say it, a couple of interesting moments. Although the reality show genre is pretty much DOA at this point, emerging online video show creators should note the way this show quickly ramped up the quality—this is your new competition.

    4. Middleton, Diana (2007-07-27). "Reality no obstacle for these entrepreneurs: Despite rejection by reality shows, their businesses thrive; they plan to expand". The Florida Times-Union. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.
    5. Middleton, Diana (2007-06-23). "The next Internet millionaire?: Local businesswoman in the running to win big through an online reality show". The Florida Times-Union. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      So far, Chance has survived the first round of voting, which whittled 300 applicants to a pool of 50. The online voting, which will count for 30 percent of her second round score, ends Wednesday. Should Chance make it to the next round, she'll be in the running for a trip to Colorado, where 12 finalists will be filmed competing for the top prize: $25,000 and the chance to form a joint venture with the show's creator, Internet marketer Joel Comm. While competing for the top prize, contestants will be "taught" how to make more money online by a panel of "Internet marketing experts," many of whom sell their own lines of books based on their money-making tactics. They will also compete in challenges similar to those on television.

      Show creator Comm, an Internet marketer, claims to have all the tools to squeeze profitability from Internet ventures. He owns several domains ranging from online coupons to a personal blog. However, one of Comm's more notable Web sites, the family-friendly World Village, has seen rapidly declining traffic, with the number of global Internet users visiting the site dropping 37 percent within 3 months, according to Alexa, a Web tracking company.

    6. Amos, James (2007-06-27). "Classes to focus on Internet opportunities". The Pueblo Chieftain. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17 – via HighBeam Research. {{ cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) ( help)
    7. Zuckerberg, Randi (2008-11-18). "Online, Reality TV Gets Even More Absurd". The Daily Beast. Archived from the original on 2015-07-17. Retrieved 2015-07-17.

      The article notes:

      The Next Internet Millionaire

      This show aired in the fall of 2007 and pulled out all the stops: a high-drama entrance by host Joel Comm in a stretch Expedition limo, a panel of expert judges, and stunt-based tasks aimed at sending the contestants packing. The key fault in this otherwise slickly produced show about the oh-so-glamorous world of, um, internet marketing was the host, internet geek—I mean, web marketing guru (and shameless self-promoter)—Joel Comm. Canadian Jaime Luchuck was declared the winner, and Joel is surely proud: she too now hawks her book From Cubicle Slave to the Next Internet Millionaire online. (Even better, when you try to navigate away from her site, you get every annoying pop-up ad ever created, making you wish internet marketing never existed in the first place.) You can also tune in to Joel Comm’s new YouTube self-celebration, The Dot Comm Story.

    8. Riley, Duncan (2007-10-04). "The Next Internet Millionaire: Inspired Programming Or Lame Sales Front". TechCrunch. Archived from the original on 2015-09-13. Retrieved 2015-09-13.
    9. "Ex-Reginan wins online game show". Leader-Post. Canwest. 2007-11-23. Archived from the original on 2015-09-13. Retrieved 2015-09-13.
    There is sufficient coverage in reliable sources to allow The Next Internet Millionaire to pass Wikipedia:Notability#General notability guideline, which requires "significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject".

    Cunard ( talk) 23:52, 12 September 2015 (UTC) reply

    • User:Cunard the parts you left (lede and cats) were wrong (my comment above is after your rewrite). The lede is still by the original COI and needs fixing. I put the COI back as the COI has relevance and (from my perspective) pertinent to the AfD. No prejudice about removing once above mentioned, AfD (and cleanup) done. Widefox; talk 00:52, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
      • The lead says:

        The Next Internet Millionaire is an online reality show hosted by Joel Comm and written and directed by Eric Holmlund. Billed as the world's first Internet reality show and based on the popular NBC show The Apprentice, the program was released entirely on the Internet in 2007.

        I've revised this to:

        The Next Internet Millionaire is an online reality show hosted by Joel Comm and written and directed by Eric Holmlund. Based on the NBC show The Apprentice, the program was released entirely on the Internet in 2007.

        The sole category is Category:Reality web series, which is accurate.

        I think this is accurate and neutral. Does this satisfy your concerns? If yes, please remove the {{ COI}} tag. Thanks, Cunard ( talk) 00:56, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Content wise, I'm not yet buying that it's completely OK - it hasn't been completely rewritten has it? Maybe at least 1. lede 2. Primary claim of it being the online Apprentice. I've given two other (painstakingly researched) reasons above. Although the COI edits are before the new TOU, the bigger picture is why I'm here. Appreciate you've fixed the content. How can these two tangential aspects be reconciled? Maybe leave it a week? Widefox; talk 01:03, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
The lead says it is based on The Apprentice. This is supported by this article in The Florida Times-Union, which says:

The Next Internet Millionaire bills itself as an online version of shows like The Apprentice, which pit ambitious businesspeople against each other for a lucrative business deal for the winner.

Therefore, the lead is supported by the source. You wrote "the parts you left (lede and cats) were wrong".

Since you removed the category Category:American reality television series, the categorization now is accurate. Since I cleaned up the lead, the lead is now accurate. Do you have any outstanding concerns about the article's prose, which I completely rewrote?

Leaving the COI tag is unhelpful because the article has been rewritten by a non-COI editor. The cleanup is done. There is no reason to keep it up during the AfD because it wrongly indicates that the cleanup is not done and biases editors towards supporting deletion.

Cunard ( talk) 01:15, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Good. The content is finally rewritten. Do you agree it's worth being cautious about a big promo/sockfarm/COI mess. You know we're evaluating this as part of the biggest one this year/ever? I welcome further scrutiny considering, and that's why this COI tag AfD is here, indicating to AfD participants that aspect (which may, or may not be 100% solved content wise now - you agree it wasn't after your original rewrite, right?). Disclosure of the catalyst (from my perspective) for the AfD isn't about biasing. My two reasons to keep are not challenged. Widefox; talk 01:32, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I completely rewrote the body of the article. I did not touch the lead, which I now have done by removing an unsourced part. The inaccurate category is a very minor issue. I don't find the tag helpful since as you've admitted, "The content is finally rewritten." Since the article was rewritten, the tag now is obsolete. But in the interest of not edit warring with you, I'll remove it after the AfD is closed. Cunard ( talk) 02:30, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • With the rules currently stated, we have the inverse of how voluntary organisations run: Volunteers with responsibilities, and staff (undisclosed paid editors) with none. Rewriting bad paid content with good volunteer content results in hiring a BOGOF editor. We're subsidising the market. This is not sustainable. Dare to say it, WP:IAR. Widefox; talk 03:56, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
That's not fair, you chose to be in that BOGOF position. Your hard work results, in effect, of subsidising the (clandestine/illegal) market. WP/WM as an org should not set up people for failure, we need actual solutions to tackle the illegal market, and BOGOF does the opposite - incentivises it. You were fully aware it was a COI rescue (a BOGOF). You cannot afterwards complain. Short term - good work, long term - destructive market force. Of course, if you can promise to fix all COI / TOU articles yes no problem. How can you even ask others to join you? It's counterproductive (per DGG), it's wikt:give hostage to fortune. (see also Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Circle (company) ) Widefox; talk 12:02, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Wow, this really turns the situation on its head. An editor attaching his good reputation to a tainted topic and asking that it be retained on that basis? Wow. I'm jumping in now with my !vote. — Brianhe ( talk) 05:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete - another piece to promote Joel Comm. Purely promotional and obviously a case of someone 'mistakenly' believing that Wikipedia is another LinkedIn, not understanding the difference between an Encyclopedia and a comercial networking site or the Yellow Pages. Whether it is part of the Orangemoody paid spamming campaign or not, DGG has said all that needs to be said already. Wikipedia cannot be allowed to be used for profit in this way at the abuse of the voluntary unpaid time that dedicated users spend building this encyclopedia which in spite of some biographies and articles about some companies, was never intended to be an additional business networking platform. Whether the text itself sounds promotional or not, the article is an advert and a plethora of sources has never been an automatic assumption of notability.-- Kudpung กุดผึ้ง ( talk) 17:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC) reply
See WP:NOTPOINTy - there's making a point, and there's disrupting to make a point. In the short term this could be seen as POINTY, long-term we need to decide what's best as BOGOF editing may be seen as POINTY. We're an encyclopaedia not a newspaper WP:NOTADVERTISING, WP:NOTNEWS, WP:10YT. If the subject is worthy we should include it, it could be argued that there's competing disruptive forces here, but let's be clear and agree one thing, WP is not a promo platform and there's no place for undisclosed COI / paid editing. That's the disruption. Mopping up after isn't (whichever form that may take). Widefox; talk 08:32, 18 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete per Kudpung's emerging BOGO philosophy nicely articulated above, and DGG's "lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion" (my emphasis). WP articles shouldn't be a way to start a crummy PR fluff piece and have volunteers finish it in order to promote a company/book/person. — Brianhe ( talk) 05:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I'm unaware of anyone else coining the phrase before I did, but it was me that called it BOGOF. Widefox; talk 21:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete It seems that this proliferation of articles all about the same marginally notable topic should be gathered into one article written by someone other than Cunard, who, no matter how independent he or she may be, still seems to have a tough time writing an NPOV article that complies with Wikipedia guidelines on promotionalism. See comments above. -- Bejnar ( talk) 00:07, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Your accusation that I've written a promotional article and violated NPOV is vague but hurtful. I've striven for NPOV in The Next Internet Millionaire by including all points of view from the reliable sources about the subject.

    Here is the "Reception" section of the article:

    Wired reviewer Adario Strange said The Next Internet Millionaire was "slicker, more professional, and easily something you might find on broadcast television". Randi Zuckerberg criticized the show in The Daily Beast, writing, "The key fault in this otherwise slickly produced show about the oh-so-glamorous world of, um, internet marketing was the host, internet geek—I mean, web marketing guru (and shameless self-promoter)—Joel Comm."

    Riley Duncan of TechCrunch said he was unsure about whether to praise or criticize the show, writing, "On the one hand it's slickly produced and some of the expert advice is worth watching, particularly if you're in the ebook ... sorry Internet Marketing business. Yet on the other hand you just know that the whole show is a front for Joel Comm Inc; a vehicle from which he can further expose himself to a broader audience and ultimately sell more ebooks and related products."

    The Wired review is positive. The Daily Beast is negative, calling Joel Comm a "shameless self-promoter". TechCrunch has a mixed review, noting the show can be educational but that it is just "a front" for self-promoter Joel Comm. This presentation is compliant with Wikipedia:Neutral point of view#Balance.

    Cunard ( talk) 04:29, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Yes, it is Cunard's right as an editor to rewrite, and that right should be defended. Widefox; talk 21:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC) reply
My apologies, I didn't intend to slight any personal individual Wikipedia editor themselves. I merely meant the tone itself came across as a bit promotional. I'll have to take another look to try to make more specific suggestions for improvement. Good luck to you, — Cirt ( talk) 03:43, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
Update: Okay so the Reception sect appears to have only three sources or so with scant discussion in an in-depth nature. Perhaps you could first try expanding that particular sect with maybe at least three times as many sources and paraphrase (instead of quote) some of the discussion to see that way if it goes into greater depth. Just a suggestion, — Cirt ( talk) 03:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • No worries, Cirt ( talk · contribs). Thank you for your helpful suggestion for improvement. The quotes in the "Reception" section definitely can be shortened, which I've done. I've shortened the quotes to be just several words instead of several sentences.

    I've reviewed the sources again, and I think only Wired, The Daily Beast, and TechCrunch comment about what they like and dislike about the show. The other two three, The Denver Post, Canwest, and The Florida Times-Union, don't comment about what they like and dislike about the show, so I was unable to include them in the "Reception" section.

    Cunard ( talk) 04:17, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Cirt ( talk · contribs), are there any other changes I can make to address your concerns about the tone being too promotional? I am unable to expand the "Reception" section because only three sources review it. I don't want my hours of work on this notable topic to be wasted by the article's deletion. Cunard ( talk) 17:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete - DGG says it best, "Lack of notability is not the only reason for deletion. Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason." And I'm not even sure this reaches the classification of borderline notability. Onel5969 TT me 16:46, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Borderline notability combined with clear promotionalism is an equally good reason.

    How is there "clear promotionalism"? Please point out specific instances of the article of promotionalism so I can fix them. I have no connection with the subject and rewrote the article because I found the subject notable.

    There is no borderline notability. The subject is clearly notable for having received significant coverage in Wired, The Daily Beast, TechCrunch, The Denver Post, Canwest, and The Florida Times-Union.

    Cunard ( talk) 17:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Userfy. I thank Cunard for the improvements taking my above comments into consideration. It's a shame more Reception wasn't able to be found, at least not yet. Perhaps userfy is the best option, for now, so further research can be done. Without prejudice to recreation in main article space at any point in time after that, with quality improvement beforehand, hopefully. — Cirt ( talk) 17:59, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I feel for ya, maybe try HighBeam Research, and also other archival online database resources that might be accessible via your local library like LexisNexis or NewsBank ? — Cirt ( talk) 18:08, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
I've already tried HighBeam Research which returned two articles from The Florida Times-Union and one article from The Pueblo Chieftain (all three of which I have already listed above). NewsBank lists the same sources mentioned above. I do not have access to LexisNexis.

I think the article in its current state is acceptable since it's neutral and reliably sourced. Although I too would like to expand the "Reception" section, I am unable to because no other available sources discuss The Next Internet Millionaire. With seven sources, there is enough material to establish notability per Wikipedia:Notability#General notability guideline, so would you consider supporting keeping the article?

Cunard ( talk) 18:29, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply

You might try LexisNexis which you could access at your local library, or ask for help from the reference librarian. Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Library might be able to help you out. — Cirt ( talk) 18:48, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
My local library does not have LexisNexis access and nor does Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Library. If you have access to LexisNexis, would you please check for The Next Internet Millionaire articles for me? Cunard ( talk) 19:50, 19 September 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Delete as promotional. – the rewritten article is not promotional. Please specifically point out where you believe it's promotional.

    While I applaud the efforts of Cunard (and others) to research references, this is simply the wrong place to be directing those energies. – it is not your place to direct volunteer editors where to direct their energies.

    Once the selection criteria is biased, no cleanup efforts can correct that bias. – this is wrong per Wikipedia:Editing policy#Wikipedia is a work in progress: perfection is not required. I have corrected any Wikipedia:Neutral point of view issues here. It is false to say that once a non-neutral article has been created, its issues never can be remedied.

    That you don't like the topic because of its origins is not a valid reason to delete a rewritten neutral article about a notable topic.

    Cunard ( talk) 02:31, 20 September 2015 (UTC) reply

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