Archived peer reviews from 2007 to 2009. Archive created in 2012, after over three years' total inactivity on the African peer review page; see here for the associated discussion.
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it a definitive and useful NPOV article on the event, with an eventual aim of making it a featured article. I'd like to know:
I'd also like to know how to request assistance for input rather than just a review, to help with
Thanks, d<3vid seaward | Talk 19:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: I had never of this day outside of the United States, interesting article but needs work. So here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 21:35, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
This is the biography of the leading Chad rebel commander. I want to ask a review of this article so to see how far it is from a potential A-class category, and what is most necessary to be done. The great lack, as all may notice, is the lack of images; there's little I can do, unfortunately, as free images of prominent Chadians are in general extremely rare (there's only one in wikipedia, and it's that of the current President of the country).-- Aldux ( talk) 18:46, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Quite nice, overall. A few minor suggestions:
Keep up the good work! Kirill 12:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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[?]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 13:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a very well written article compared to most African countries and I believe has a chance at FA and may be GA status already. I am looking for specifics about everything: image placement, sentence structure, citations...
Thanks,
§tepshep •
¡Talk to me! 22:13, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Biomedeng ( talk):
I think with some more work (spinning off a lot of the history to the history article, adding more images and citations, copyediting) you should submit for GA status. Good luck. Biomedeng ( talk) 09:23, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
I've originally started this article to fill a red link, but then I started taking interest in finding sources, so it progressively expanded to reach a respectable 30KB. I've attempted to source it the most carefully possible, and it seems to be mostly ok on this side; what worries me most is 1) the absence of images 2) the prose, as I'm no native 3) I've been quite extensive in the description of the constitution as approved in 1996, maybe too extensive; what do you think? Any suggestion, even brief hints, would be immensely appreciated. Thanks in advance, Aldux 20:19, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
I just put together the page this past week with a DYK entry making the main page today. I myself am not that familiar with the disinvestment campaign nor the general circumstances surrounding it as I am not South African nor was I alive at the time of this campaign. As such, I am looking for feedback in the following areas:
Last, but not least, I am admittedly not the most skilled writer, thus any copy editing help is most than welcome. -- CGM1980 01:47, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
Michael talk 01:57, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
I saw this article, and it seemed to be very comprehensive about an interesting subject, well written, researched, and cited sources (which need to be /ref'ed in wikistyle). I've placed it in the main peer review section, and the article's talk page is bare, so I think it would be great to get some peer review from some editor/experts. There are many interesting photos and I think it would be nice to get some review for FA preparation. Thanks. Rhetth 01:14, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
Archived peer reviews from 2007 to 2009. Archive created in 2012, after over three years' total inactivity on the African peer review page; see here for the associated discussion.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it a definitive and useful NPOV article on the event, with an eventual aim of making it a featured article. I'd like to know:
I'd also like to know how to request assistance for input rather than just a review, to help with
Thanks, d<3vid seaward | Talk 19:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: I had never of this day outside of the United States, interesting article but needs work. So here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 21:35, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
This is the biography of the leading Chad rebel commander. I want to ask a review of this article so to see how far it is from a potential A-class category, and what is most necessary to be done. The great lack, as all may notice, is the lack of images; there's little I can do, unfortunately, as free images of prominent Chadians are in general extremely rare (there's only one in wikipedia, and it's that of the current President of the country).-- Aldux ( talk) 18:46, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Quite nice, overall. A few minor suggestions:
Keep up the good work! Kirill 12:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program:
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
[?]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 13:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it is a very well written article compared to most African countries and I believe has a chance at FA and may be GA status already. I am looking for specifics about everything: image placement, sentence structure, citations...
Thanks,
§tepshep •
¡Talk to me! 22:13, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Biomedeng ( talk):
I think with some more work (spinning off a lot of the history to the history article, adding more images and citations, copyediting) you should submit for GA status. Good luck. Biomedeng ( talk) 09:23, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
I've originally started this article to fill a red link, but then I started taking interest in finding sources, so it progressively expanded to reach a respectable 30KB. I've attempted to source it the most carefully possible, and it seems to be mostly ok on this side; what worries me most is 1) the absence of images 2) the prose, as I'm no native 3) I've been quite extensive in the description of the constitution as approved in 1996, maybe too extensive; what do you think? Any suggestion, even brief hints, would be immensely appreciated. Thanks in advance, Aldux 20:19, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
I just put together the page this past week with a DYK entry making the main page today. I myself am not that familiar with the disinvestment campaign nor the general circumstances surrounding it as I am not South African nor was I alive at the time of this campaign. As such, I am looking for feedback in the following areas:
Last, but not least, I am admittedly not the most skilled writer, thus any copy editing help is most than welcome. -- CGM1980 01:47, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
Michael talk 01:57, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
I saw this article, and it seemed to be very comprehensive about an interesting subject, well written, researched, and cited sources (which need to be /ref'ed in wikistyle). I've placed it in the main peer review section, and the article's talk page is bare, so I think it would be great to get some peer review from some editor/experts. There are many interesting photos and I think it would be nice to get some review for FA preparation. Thanks. Rhetth 01:14, 6 May 2007 (UTC)