Your recent article submission to
Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ldm1954 was:
This is almost there for a decent article. Please:
Add more in-line citations. I think it is easy to find another 15-20
Add links to other pages both the text and as See also at the end, for instance
Ferroelectric,
Domain wall and many others.
Redo the lead (1st paragraph). It needs to define in the first sentence what Domain switching in ferroelectrics is. The other sentences of the lead should help introduce a novice to the topic, e.g. a first year undergrad. It is fine if it gets more complex later.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Hello, Tk2134!
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Ldm1954 (
talk) 20:24, 28 September 2023 (UTC)reply
Your recent article submission to
Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ldm1954 was:
This is almost there for a decent article. Please:
Add more in-line citations. I think it is easy to find another 15-20
Add links to other pages both the text and as See also at the end, for instance
Ferroelectric,
Domain wall and many others.
Redo the lead (1st paragraph). It needs to define in the first sentence what Domain switching in ferroelectrics is. The other sentences of the lead should help introduce a novice to the topic, e.g. a first year undergrad. It is fine if it gets more complex later.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Hello, Tk2134!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!
Ldm1954 (
talk) 20:24, 28 September 2023 (UTC)reply