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SAMI talk 09:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)Hi Severndroog, it looks like you were having difficulties editing Blisland. I've added the link to Charles_Edward-Collins, which I think is what you were trying to do. Hope this helps, DuncanHill ( talk) 15:42, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
Hi. You should probably take a look at my tweaks to the DD article - the use of convert, for example, will save some time. I've removed the bit about Strada riders because I have no idea why it's relevant - perhaps it needs explaining if you intend to add it again? In the same way the reference to "chopper" needs clarification- is it Raleigh Chopper or something else?
It might be worth adding a route section to the article. That could deal with some of the stuff about the feeding station for example and keep it separate from history. If you're going to stick in headings for each dynamo, btw, then how far back do you intend to go? It might be better to concentrate on developing proper prose with good style in the article perhaps? Oh, I also removed the "advert" for next year as it was, frankly, a bloody obvious advert. Add the date to the lead, sure, but do it cleverly! And, as a head's up, date style rules on wikipedia say that we don't use st, nd or th in dates - just 16 July is fine. Blue Square Thing ( talk) 20:03, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
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SAMI talk 09:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)Hi Severndroog, it looks like you were having difficulties editing Blisland. I've added the link to Charles_Edward-Collins, which I think is what you were trying to do. Hope this helps, DuncanHill ( talk) 15:42, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
Hi. You should probably take a look at my tweaks to the DD article - the use of convert, for example, will save some time. I've removed the bit about Strada riders because I have no idea why it's relevant - perhaps it needs explaining if you intend to add it again? In the same way the reference to "chopper" needs clarification- is it Raleigh Chopper or something else?
It might be worth adding a route section to the article. That could deal with some of the stuff about the feeding station for example and keep it separate from history. If you're going to stick in headings for each dynamo, btw, then how far back do you intend to go? It might be better to concentrate on developing proper prose with good style in the article perhaps? Oh, I also removed the "advert" for next year as it was, frankly, a bloody obvious advert. Add the date to the lead, sure, but do it cleverly! And, as a head's up, date style rules on wikipedia say that we don't use st, nd or th in dates - just 16 July is fine. Blue Square Thing ( talk) 20:03, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
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Editing using a company PC, therefore the IP address is the company with 2,000+ users. Solution is I'll only create/edit articles using my personal home PC in future Severndroog ( talk) 16:38, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
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This account isn't blocked. The underlying IP range, however, is blocked as an an anonymizing proxy. --jpgordon 𝄢𝄆 𝄐𝄇 17:54, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
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