Hi Librarygurl, sorry for the delay in feedback! Your message got buried in the Slack onslaught :) Here are my thoughts about your article:
- Wikipedia has specific policies about using boldface. For a biography, you'll only want to bold the subject's name rather than the entire first sentence.
- For biographies you generally see the birth date or year and the death date or year (if applicable). So the first part of the article should go Linda Biehl (born 1943) is a philanthropist...
- Movie titles, like book titles, should be italicised (The Year of the Great Storm)
Other than that the article looks really good! Excellent use of citations. Elysia (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 17:49, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Librarygurl, sorry for the delay in feedback! Your message got buried in the Slack onslaught :) Here are my thoughts about your article:
- Wikipedia has specific policies about using boldface. For a biography, you'll only want to bold the subject's name rather than the entire first sentence.
- For biographies you generally see the birth date or year and the death date or year (if applicable). So the first part of the article should go Linda Biehl (born 1943) is a philanthropist...
- Movie titles, like book titles, should be italicised (The Year of the Great Storm)
Other than that the article looks really good! Excellent use of citations. Elysia (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 17:49, 22 November 2019 (UTC)