I'll keep adding bits here as I make my way though the article.
I may have some minor comments later, but a quick glance through makes it look ready to move to mainspace. JoshuaZ 07:15, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
Aside from the spelling errors, in an article as controversial as this practically every sentence will need referencing. I think you'd have to double the references at least before you would be able to make any headway against opposition from Lubavitch editors. As a simple example, both of these sentences would required attribution Schneerson's death lead to a rethinking of the theology of messianism within Chabad. While the funeral was attended by a few dozen extreme messianists who danced throughout the procession and argued that his death was a required part of the process of him returning as Messiah - most messianists were subdued. Those are just two examples of many. Jayjg (talk) 16:52, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
I'll keep adding bits here as I make my way though the article.
I may have some minor comments later, but a quick glance through makes it look ready to move to mainspace. JoshuaZ 07:15, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
Aside from the spelling errors, in an article as controversial as this practically every sentence will need referencing. I think you'd have to double the references at least before you would be able to make any headway against opposition from Lubavitch editors. As a simple example, both of these sentences would required attribution Schneerson's death lead to a rethinking of the theology of messianism within Chabad. While the funeral was attended by a few dozen extreme messianists who danced throughout the procession and argued that his death was a required part of the process of him returning as Messiah - most messianists were subdued. Those are just two examples of many. Jayjg (talk) 16:52, 4 March 2007 (UTC)