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Darrien,
Your article needs to be consistent with the Wikipedia style. Look at the formatting. Also, the article lacks a clear lead.
Mcassell04 (
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I think this is a great topic, I was unaware this group was even on campus. With that being said, the organization of your article is a little all over the place. I would suggest starting with your introduction and following it up with origins, organization, programs, and potential impact-in that order. In addition, I would add more information about the founding members and why they felt inspired to start the organization, as well as some statistics on the potential impacts of the group. Lastly, I would suggest rereading your article and cleaning up some grammatical mistakes that were throughout. Otherwise, good work!
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This page is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the
United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions.
This page is within the scope of WikiProject African diaspora, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
African diaspora on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.African diasporaWikipedia:WikiProject African diasporaTemplate:WikiProject African diasporaAfrican diaspora articles
This page is within the scope of WikiProject Higher education, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
higher education,
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colleges on Wikipedia. Please visit the project page to join the
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Darrien,
Your article needs to be consistent with the Wikipedia style. Look at the formatting. Also, the article lacks a clear lead.
Mcassell04 (
talk) 00:58, 26 October 2015 (UTC)reply
I think this is a great topic, I was unaware this group was even on campus. With that being said, the organization of your article is a little all over the place. I would suggest starting with your introduction and following it up with origins, organization, programs, and potential impact-in that order. In addition, I would add more information about the founding members and why they felt inspired to start the organization, as well as some statistics on the potential impacts of the group. Lastly, I would suggest rereading your article and cleaning up some grammatical mistakes that were throughout. Otherwise, good work!
Jhutch2872 (
talk) 04:31, 16 November 2015 (UTC)jhutch2872reply
