Please leave me comments with your signature, Thank you ( Alexabadura ( talk) 02:36, 17 February 2014 (UTC))
You did a good job adding relevant content to the article. However, you will need to go back and fix your citations. Linking to Ebsco host will not work, because people reading the article may not be at an institution or have access. Provide the full article citation as you would for a written paper for class. Check out the other references for examples. If there is a permanent online link to the article you can use that, but not a link for the search database. Mpetracca ( talk) 16:45, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
Please leave me comments with your signature, Thank you ( Alexabadura ( talk) 02:36, 17 February 2014 (UTC))
You did a good job adding relevant content to the article. However, you will need to go back and fix your citations. Linking to Ebsco host will not work, because people reading the article may not be at an institution or have access. Provide the full article citation as you would for a written paper for class. Check out the other references for examples. If there is a permanent online link to the article you can use that, but not a link for the search database. Mpetracca ( talk) 16:45, 4 May 2014 (UTC)