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I've tidied up the "firings" of members, trying to provide online refs and reasons where known. Also I decided to add refs for deaths of former members. Some of these deaths are not mentioned in the main text. Do you believe George Young's death should be acknowledged in the main text? I'm okay with whatever you decide. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 22:52, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
You have my best wishes on your submission to FAC. However, I won't be able to assist further on the journey of this article. Have fun. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 04:58, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
As requested I've started a paragraph on early 1970s Australian pop scene. I've concentrated on Australian pub rock. You may need to add info on glam rock (as that's their early style). You will also have to check formatting of refs and latter wikilinks which should be de-linked now. Enjoy. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 21:56, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
Do you want to mention context for AC/DC's ambitions to succeed in UK and US? If so, consider Ayers Rock Australian music scene ¶2, you could add the Easybeats to list of Australian artists which had "little commercial success" in UK. If so, probably insert 1960s in the sentence starting with "Many artists..." and reduce the number of examples to three in total.
These ambitions were fuelled by George and Vanda's efforts to enter the UK market as members of the Easys (and later groups) as well as Burgess with the Masters and even Scott's attempt with Fraternity. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 19:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
Could you check the sentences at the start of: Malcolm Young retires... Do they look okay, now? shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 12:19, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
I've had a go at a few of the remaining ones. You should check. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 13:07, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
I'm sadden by the withdrawal but understand your rationale. Keep the AC/DC flag flying, all the best with your future endeavours. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 00:52, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
Hey shaidar cuebiyar, so the AC/DC article was massively copyedited for WP:GOCE. If you have time, are you able to copyedit the article to make it Aussie English? — VAUGHAN J. ( t · c) 00:46, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Bon Scott joins
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Initial success and record deal
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Cliff Williams joins and death of Bon Scott
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Brian Johnson joins and rebirth
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Line-up changes and commercial decline
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Popularity regained
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Popularity confirmed
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Black Ice and tour
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Malcolm Young retires and hiatus
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Reunion and Power Up
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That's it for me, I'll let you do the rest. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 06:34, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but consider "due to Slade quitting due to a poorly timed conversation between him and Malcolm." Too many "due", it also leaves an average reader hanging about the meaning of "poorly timed conversation". From what Slade says he quit because Malcolm revealed he was already considering Rudd's return but wanted to have Slade available if Rudd was unable or unwilling to resume. All up, this needs to be worded better. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 08:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
I thought the PR had lapsed. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 02:38, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I'm just querying the addition of Sheffzick to the AC/DC members page. I haven't reverted you but I think saying he was a member of AC/DC is a real stretch. The band hadn't been named, and never played a gig with him in the lineup. He really just knocked about in some pre-band rehearsals. Engleheart's book doesn't actually talk about him being a member of AC/DC, and I don't think any other source mentions him at all. It's more accurate to say he was recruited with what would become AC/DC in mind, but was offloaded before the band was properly formed. He might be better suited to a footnote somewhere. It's also worth pointing out that if we decide Sheffzick was part of some original lineup of the band, then neither Dave Evans nor Angus were original members, as their arrival came after Sheffzick had left. If we take Engleheart's word exactly as he's written it, that "lineup" appeared to be Malcolm, Sheffzick and Burgess, which doesn't look like a full band to me – it doesn't appear to have had a vocalist. Bretonbanquet ( talk) 02:49, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
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I've tidied up the "firings" of members, trying to provide online refs and reasons where known. Also I decided to add refs for deaths of former members. Some of these deaths are not mentioned in the main text. Do you believe George Young's death should be acknowledged in the main text? I'm okay with whatever you decide. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 22:52, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
You have my best wishes on your submission to FAC. However, I won't be able to assist further on the journey of this article. Have fun. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 04:58, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
As requested I've started a paragraph on early 1970s Australian pop scene. I've concentrated on Australian pub rock. You may need to add info on glam rock (as that's their early style). You will also have to check formatting of refs and latter wikilinks which should be de-linked now. Enjoy. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 21:56, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
Do you want to mention context for AC/DC's ambitions to succeed in UK and US? If so, consider Ayers Rock Australian music scene ¶2, you could add the Easybeats to list of Australian artists which had "little commercial success" in UK. If so, probably insert 1960s in the sentence starting with "Many artists..." and reduce the number of examples to three in total.
These ambitions were fuelled by George and Vanda's efforts to enter the UK market as members of the Easys (and later groups) as well as Burgess with the Masters and even Scott's attempt with Fraternity. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 19:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
Could you check the sentences at the start of: Malcolm Young retires... Do they look okay, now? shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 12:19, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
I've had a go at a few of the remaining ones. You should check. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 13:07, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
I'm sadden by the withdrawal but understand your rationale. Keep the AC/DC flag flying, all the best with your future endeavours. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 00:52, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
Hey shaidar cuebiyar, so the AC/DC article was massively copyedited for WP:GOCE. If you have time, are you able to copyedit the article to make it Aussie English? — VAUGHAN J. ( t · c) 00:46, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Bon Scott joins
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 10:49, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Initial success and record deal
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 12:28, 7 May 2024 (UTC)12:30, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Cliff Williams joins and death of Bon Scott
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 01:47, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Brian Johnson joins and rebirth
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 02:32, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Line-up changes and commercial decline
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 02:51, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Popularity regained
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 04:33, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Popularity confirmed
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 04:52, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Black Ice and tour
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 05:20, 9 May 2024 (UTC)05:22, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Malcolm Young retires and hiatus
Enjoy your work. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 06:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Reunion and Power Up
Enjoy your work.
That's it for me, I'll let you do the rest. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 06:34, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but consider "due to Slade quitting due to a poorly timed conversation between him and Malcolm." Too many "due", it also leaves an average reader hanging about the meaning of "poorly timed conversation". From what Slade says he quit because Malcolm revealed he was already considering Rudd's return but wanted to have Slade available if Rudd was unable or unwilling to resume. All up, this needs to be worded better. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 08:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
I thought the PR had lapsed. shaidar cuebiyar ( talk) 02:38, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I'm just querying the addition of Sheffzick to the AC/DC members page. I haven't reverted you but I think saying he was a member of AC/DC is a real stretch. The band hadn't been named, and never played a gig with him in the lineup. He really just knocked about in some pre-band rehearsals. Engleheart's book doesn't actually talk about him being a member of AC/DC, and I don't think any other source mentions him at all. It's more accurate to say he was recruited with what would become AC/DC in mind, but was offloaded before the band was properly formed. He might be better suited to a footnote somewhere. It's also worth pointing out that if we decide Sheffzick was part of some original lineup of the band, then neither Dave Evans nor Angus were original members, as their arrival came after Sheffzick had left. If we take Engleheart's word exactly as he's written it, that "lineup" appeared to be Malcolm, Sheffzick and Burgess, which doesn't look like a full band to me – it doesn't appear to have had a vocalist. Bretonbanquet ( talk) 02:49, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello. This is a message to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions, such as the edit(s) you made to Talk:Tyla (album), did not appear to be constructive and have been reverted. Please take some time to familiarise yourself with our policies and guidelines. You can find information about these at our welcome page which also provides further information about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. If you only meant to make test edits, please use your sandbox for that. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. Thank you. dxneo ( talk) 14:18, 15 May 2024 (UTC)