The following comments relate to this course. Thanks for working on this Trintyo12. -- Joe ( talk) 13:50, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
To read other students' draft articles click here.Then click each link for the article. -- Joe ( talk) 18:08, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Created new section El Paso, Texas#Skate Parks
Hi Trinity -
I noticed your edit to the page on colonias, and was wondering if you were intending to further edit the page as part of your course? I'm working with a class on environmental justice at UC Berkeley, and that series of pages is on the to-revamp list of a number of my students. (No worries at all if you intend to work on it further, I just figure it'll be easier to know ahead of time if another course is also working on it, so coordination can occur :)) Best, Kevin Gorman ( talk) 08:39, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
How you included all of the skate parks in El Paso and its surroundings where really good. Providing links to each skate park was a helpful I clicked on it to see what the skate parks look like and it turns out I have actually been to one of them. Just the history of the skate parks that you provided for us to read were I would say outstanding. One thing I recommend is adding a little more references on all of the parks in El Paso.-- BrantDaMerc ( talk) 08:56, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
You have done a great job in editing information to that section, my only suggestion is to add more information in the section about the locations, adding operation hours, what the limitation are, and what are the restrictions to the use of this public places. -- Xaleman87 ( talk) 03:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
The following comments relate to this course. Thanks for working on this Trintyo12. -- Joe ( talk) 13:50, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
To read other students' draft articles click here.Then click each link for the article. -- Joe ( talk) 18:08, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Created new section El Paso, Texas#Skate Parks
Hi Trinity -
I noticed your edit to the page on colonias, and was wondering if you were intending to further edit the page as part of your course? I'm working with a class on environmental justice at UC Berkeley, and that series of pages is on the to-revamp list of a number of my students. (No worries at all if you intend to work on it further, I just figure it'll be easier to know ahead of time if another course is also working on it, so coordination can occur :)) Best, Kevin Gorman ( talk) 08:39, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
How you included all of the skate parks in El Paso and its surroundings where really good. Providing links to each skate park was a helpful I clicked on it to see what the skate parks look like and it turns out I have actually been to one of them. Just the history of the skate parks that you provided for us to read were I would say outstanding. One thing I recommend is adding a little more references on all of the parks in El Paso.-- BrantDaMerc ( talk) 08:56, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
You have done a great job in editing information to that section, my only suggestion is to add more information in the section about the locations, adding operation hours, what the limitation are, and what are the restrictions to the use of this public places. -- Xaleman87 ( talk) 03:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)