Hopefully this is the right place to do this... I have no idea what I'm doing...
I really like all the additions y'all made, it makes a lot more sense now. The only thing I noticed is that there are a couple sentences that sometimes have tense changes and stuff, and I think they were all from the previous editor, like in the 'Name' section it says "...came to be used as the village's name as a result of the practice of ship captains to refer to villages..." which could just be "...of ship captains referring..." and in 'History' they mentioned Koyah saying "It is thought that Koyah's humiliation by Kendrick in 1789 and 1791 is thought...", which isn't necessary. Dig that you guys explained that though, had no idea what they were talking about. Other than that, it's dope!
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 16:46, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
Hopefully this is the right place to do this... I have no idea what I'm doing...
I really like all the additions y'all made, it makes a lot more sense now. The only thing I noticed is that there are a couple sentences that sometimes have tense changes and stuff, and I think they were all from the previous editor, like in the 'Name' section it says "...came to be used as the village's name as a result of the practice of ship captains to refer to villages..." which could just be "...of ship captains referring..." and in 'History' they mentioned Koyah saying "It is thought that Koyah's humiliation by Kendrick in 1789 and 1791 is thought...", which isn't necessary. Dig that you guys explained that though, had no idea what they were talking about. Other than that, it's dope!
Hello, Thechillbus, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
Handouts
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Additional Resources
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 16:46, 26 September 2017 (UTC)