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greetings
hey deva!!
signature: Hallie.tg ( talk) 20:57, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
This is in really good shape! I don't have much to add, but I think you could elaborate a bit on the performance of gender and include a bit more of a feminist theory analysis to that. It reads well without it so I don't think it's necessary, but it might strengthen that section a bit. It looks great overall...good job!! -- Hermioneknope ( talk) 20:56, 22 November 2015 (UTC)
Please complete the student training. If you have already gone through it, be sure to click the button at the end to record that you finished it. -- Arrotramel ( talk) 22:34, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
greetings
hey deva!!
signature: Hallie.tg ( talk) 20:57, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
This is in really good shape! I don't have much to add, but I think you could elaborate a bit on the performance of gender and include a bit more of a feminist theory analysis to that. It reads well without it so I don't think it's necessary, but it might strengthen that section a bit. It looks great overall...good job!! -- Hermioneknope ( talk) 20:56, 22 November 2015 (UTC)