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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Iron Projects is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Iron Projects until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 18:35, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
Hi, let's please ignore for a second that I've nominated your first article for deletion. I'm not here as an antagonist. I wanted to offer you a few basic tips, because I can tell that you want to be a constructive editor here. If I can encourage you to take a look at the manual of style, and specifically as it pertains to your field of interest (for example, MOS:MUSIC) I think you'll benefit a great deal. One of many ways Iron Projects was suffering, was from inappropriate use of bold text, italics, ""quotations"", etc. A good rule of thumb: You'll almost never use bold. Save it for the name of the subject in the lead sentence. (See Jimmy Stewart). Italics are used for the titles of larger works. Star Wars, Seinfeld, Straight Outta Compton. Quotations are used for minor works, like song titles or article titles or episode titles. "Gangsta Gangsta", "The Contest", etc. Obviously there are some exceptions and other uses, but for an introduction, this is what I've got. Regards. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 04:33, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
i really do appreciate your feedback and thank you, i intend to make the adjustments, it is my first article and i was merely trying to format it clearly and there's so much just in the way of code to learn to begin with, i intend to make the suggested changes and also remove the "advertising" speak.
to clarify i'm not associated with the band but did attend many of their shows and felt they are worthy of the page since there is hardly anything about them anywhere.
hykoo mentioned them as an influence on his music in 2006(approx) doesnt describe their impact? they influenced a signed artist with multiple albums he says so himself theyre mentioned specifically by Illi and Hykko both individual references and their inter-state performance was reviewed positively by name. so there are 3 specific references (there are many more) that you have chosen to completely ignore from your evaluation.
im sorry but your evaluation of the references are simply wrong. Mykel IS from the Iron Projects, it is about him and his music (that he does with the iron projects) the entire video is about music and if you watched the credits you'd see that pabstrakt is involved, thus making it clearly a piece by the Iron Projects.
why are you approaching this form the perspective that total notability has to be established by every single source every time?
every statement in there is referenced, but you are attacking individual references for only telling parts of the story. Even when other references fill in the very holes you are poking at.
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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Iron Projects is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Iron Projects until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 18:35, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
Hi, let's please ignore for a second that I've nominated your first article for deletion. I'm not here as an antagonist. I wanted to offer you a few basic tips, because I can tell that you want to be a constructive editor here. If I can encourage you to take a look at the manual of style, and specifically as it pertains to your field of interest (for example, MOS:MUSIC) I think you'll benefit a great deal. One of many ways Iron Projects was suffering, was from inappropriate use of bold text, italics, ""quotations"", etc. A good rule of thumb: You'll almost never use bold. Save it for the name of the subject in the lead sentence. (See Jimmy Stewart). Italics are used for the titles of larger works. Star Wars, Seinfeld, Straight Outta Compton. Quotations are used for minor works, like song titles or article titles or episode titles. "Gangsta Gangsta", "The Contest", etc. Obviously there are some exceptions and other uses, but for an introduction, this is what I've got. Regards. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 04:33, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
i really do appreciate your feedback and thank you, i intend to make the adjustments, it is my first article and i was merely trying to format it clearly and there's so much just in the way of code to learn to begin with, i intend to make the suggested changes and also remove the "advertising" speak.
to clarify i'm not associated with the band but did attend many of their shows and felt they are worthy of the page since there is hardly anything about them anywhere.
hykoo mentioned them as an influence on his music in 2006(approx) doesnt describe their impact? they influenced a signed artist with multiple albums he says so himself theyre mentioned specifically by Illi and Hykko both individual references and their inter-state performance was reviewed positively by name. so there are 3 specific references (there are many more) that you have chosen to completely ignore from your evaluation.
im sorry but your evaluation of the references are simply wrong. Mykel IS from the Iron Projects, it is about him and his music (that he does with the iron projects) the entire video is about music and if you watched the credits you'd see that pabstrakt is involved, thus making it clearly a piece by the Iron Projects.
why are you approaching this form the perspective that total notability has to be established by every single source every time?
every statement in there is referenced, but you are attacking individual references for only telling parts of the story. Even when other references fill in the very holes you are poking at.
Hello and
welcome to Wikipedia. When you add content to
talk pages and Wikipedia pages that have open discussion (but never when editing articles), please be sure to
sign your posts. There are two ways to do this. Either:
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Thank you. -- SineBot ( talk) 07:20, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
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